where did our love go??

I thought you loved me,
but where did it all go?
you left without warning me
and know im all alone
when i see you now
i see her with you to
you have moved on
yes i know that
but i want to moved on too
but somthing is holding me back
and i think its our love
or the love i thought we had
i wish everything was still the same
but i guess we have both changed
i really want our love back
but will it every be the same??

i just felt an urge to write a poem its my first one so i love would some constructive criticism. positive or negative i would love to know.

I really like this poem.
Love can make a person come
to a halt and its a nice expression.
There are a few things though
that I thought would open the poem up a little more. Nothing
much I added, but read yours then read the revised
one and tell me what you think.

I thought you loved me,
but where did it all go?
you left without warning me
and now im all alone
when i see you now
i see her with you to
you have moved on
but why cant i too
is somthing holding me back
from all the years which seemed we were right on track
i think its our love
or the love i thought we had
i wish everything was still the same
but i guess we have both changed
i really want our love back
but will it every be the same??

Either way I like the poem. Keep it up...
Definately wanna read more from you

thanks so much for the adivce
i like what you did with it too
when i write some more i will add them

You are very welcome...
Can't wait for more

I love writting poems
to express myself
and urz is good...
Something i do when writting
is letting it come all at one and writting it down the way i thought of it
then i read it over and over to shorten it fix the phrases up until
I come up with something i'm proud off..

Urz is really good
and Janae fixed it up great...
Really good expression!

thanks
i like all ur poems on here too there really good

Aww thanks Kaylee!!!