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2 Re: Me, Myself, and I Fri Jul 10, 2009 12:46 pm
LADY IVERSON
librachick wrote:starting a new story
YAY!!
3 Re: Me, Myself, and I Fri Jul 10, 2009 5:04 pm
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Im here siting in my room thinking about my life. Im a 14yr old dope girl with no parents. My mom died when i was 10 in a shoot out and my father died a few days later, that broke my heart. Now im all alone in this cold world with no parents, no friends, no family, no one but my, myself and i.
I was sitting a the bus stop crying my eyes out because both my parents are gone they left me to die on these streets. I was crying and crying until a black hummer pulled up in front of me. I wasn't scared because i was willing to die to meet my mother and father above me. They rolled down there window pointing a gun at me. Im waiting and waiting for this mystery person to shoot me already, kill me. I was ready to hear gun shots, but instead i hear laughing. they pulled the window all the way down it was my buddy from school Kevin. I just looked at him I wanted to kill him cause....I wanted to die right then and there.
should i continue
4 Re: Me, Myself, and I Fri Jul 10, 2009 5:55 pm
sinqlebby !
i think u should.......is dat da main character
WELCOME.....WAS UR NAME ON PRMB?????8 Re: Me, Myself, and I Fri Jul 10, 2009 6:24 pm
sinqlebby !
AND IM A LIBRA TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
LIBRAS ROCK....SERIOUSLY
LIBRAS ROCK....SERIOUSLY
9 Re: Me, Myself, and I Fri Jul 10, 2009 6:26 pm
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nope nope....libras totally rock :} whens ur birthday 
11 Re: Me, Myself, and I Fri Jul 10, 2009 8:30 pm
golden07
Admin
Yea. con10u. Lets see how it plays out.
13 Re: Me, Myself, and I Fri Jul 10, 2009 10:17 pm
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mines on october 15 :} i will continue might add tomorrow
15 Re: Me, Myself, and I Sun Jul 12, 2009 4:23 pm
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At the age of 13 I joined the game from Kevin I dropped out of school and everything I'm thinking thiers nobody out there that cares about what I do with my life. No one to encourage me or push me to do things the right way. I moved in with Kevin and his 4 brothers Anthony, Chris, Benson, and Aaron. Now Kevin had som sexy ass brothers so living with them would be hard for me plus all of us are in the game. I went to my new room Kevin showed me it was red with black dots it was so pretty cause those sre my favorite color. I changed into my black tank top and red jogging pants with some black timberlands. I was going to the store to buy me some tampons cause they didnt have none. I was walkin down stairs and they were talking I'm not the type of person to be eavesdropping in other people conversation. I as listening and they were saying......
Last edited by librachick on Sun Jul 12, 2009 6:04 pm; edited 1 time in total
Anthony
Chris
Benson
17 Re: Me, Myself, and I Sun Jul 12, 2009 7:47 pm
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can you say sexy ass brothers for real i like the different races you used it kinda reminds me of that movie four brothers with tyrese and andre 3000. good story keep adding girl
22 Re: Me, Myself, and I Mon Jul 13, 2009 1:39 pm
golden07
Admin
librachick wrote:addin tonight or tomorrow morning
Okay and upz...
23 Re: Me, Myself, and I Mon Jul 13, 2009 8:27 pm
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Kevin: She's staying with us for a while.
Anthony: No she can't live with us, I mean it wont feel right having a girl in our home and on our team.
Aaron: She'll slow us down.
Kevin: She not like them other girl. She's different very different.
Benson: Yea whatever you say but why us, she dont have another friend she can live with some place else.
Kevin: Cause shes my best friend guys and i kninda like her.
They looked at him like he was CRAZY.
Aaron: How could you like her she's wierd and......... just wierd.
Anthony: Foreal.
Kevin: Trust me when you get to know her better she's real cool and.....
That's when I came down I knew he was going to tell them why im always quiet and stuff. They looked at me and I looked at them until Kevin said
Kevin:What up Brooke
And I just looked at them and then i said softly
Brooke: I'm going to the store I'll be right back.
Kevin: You want me...
Brooke: No I'll walk thanks though.
I left the house and started walking to the store (it wasnt that far). When I got thier there were couple of guys on the wall looking at me and I looked at them like " what up am I post to be scared of yall." So I kept on staring till I was in the stored. I bought what i had to buy then I left the stored walking right by them guys again with them staring right at me yet again and like i did before I stared right back at them. When I got in front of them I stopped and stared...and stared...and stared....then started walking back to the house until one the boys said
G/V: Now I see why the boss wanted to kill her mother.
I turned around so fast I dropped the stuff I brought and pulled out my gun and just started shooting killing everyone, everybody. I cleaned up my mess and picked up my bag, started walking back home like nothing happen. When I got home I walked pass the boys without saying nothing to them. I went upstairs and washed up and stayed in there till all the hot water was all gone.
Anthony: No she can't live with us, I mean it wont feel right having a girl in our home and on our team.
Aaron: She'll slow us down.
Kevin: She not like them other girl. She's different very different.
Benson: Yea whatever you say but why us, she dont have another friend she can live with some place else.
Kevin: Cause shes my best friend guys and i kninda like her.
They looked at him like he was CRAZY.
Aaron: How could you like her she's wierd and......... just wierd.
Anthony: Foreal.
Kevin: Trust me when you get to know her better she's real cool and.....
That's when I came down I knew he was going to tell them why im always quiet and stuff. They looked at me and I looked at them until Kevin said
Kevin:What up Brooke
And I just looked at them and then i said softly
Brooke: I'm going to the store I'll be right back.
Kevin: You want me...
Brooke: No I'll walk thanks though.
I left the house and started walking to the store (it wasnt that far). When I got thier there were couple of guys on the wall looking at me and I looked at them like " what up am I post to be scared of yall." So I kept on staring till I was in the stored. I bought what i had to buy then I left the stored walking right by them guys again with them staring right at me yet again and like i did before I stared right back at them. When I got in front of them I stopped and stared...and stared...and stared....then started walking back to the house until one the boys said
G/V: Now I see why the boss wanted to kill her mother.
I turned around so fast I dropped the stuff I brought and pulled out my gun and just started shooting killing everyone, everybody. I cleaned up my mess and picked up my bag, started walking back home like nothing happen. When I got home I walked pass the boys without saying nothing to them. I went upstairs and washed up and stayed in there till all the hot water was all gone.
Back downstairs with the guys
24 Re: Me, Myself, and I Mon Jul 13, 2009 8:41 pm
golden07
Admin
Wow 
girl was pissed off
I like that add. Add more please Upz...
And a suggestion.
Can you add a space in between when someone begin to speak
and when they are thinking.
but its good. Wanna know more
girl was pissed offI like that add. Add more please Upz...
And a suggestion.
Can you add a space in between when someone begin to speak
and when they are thinking.
but its good. Wanna know more
25 Re: Me, Myself, and I Mon Jul 13, 2009 11:22 pm
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golden07 wrote:Wow
I like that add. Add more please Upz...
And a suggestion.
Can you add a space in between when someone begin to speak
and when they are thinking.
but its good. Wanna know more
glad you liked it :} and i will make sure to do that next add
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