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177 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 15, 2009 8:14 am
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I have no clue but I am going to check on it when I get home this evening.
178 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 15, 2009 8:22 am
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Chapter 5 |Woman‘s Intuition|
Landing in Jacksonville, I stared out of the window at the beautiful scenery. It feels so good to be back in Florida. The pilot warned us we are going to be landing soon, so we stayed seated. I couldn’t wait to get out. Although we are not in Miami, I was just happy to see blue water and sand with beautiful palm trees. I look towards Marcus and Zay who were sleep still. I chuckled a little, then budge Marcus to wake him up. He had awaken as though he was confused.
“We here yet?” he asked.
“Yea, we are about to land soon.” I said then glance back towards the window.
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Walking off of the plane, there stood a male with dreads swaying from one side to the next as though he was looking for someone. We knew who it was as Marcus signaled Corey over. They walked up to each other and greeted with brotherly hugs.
“Man good to see you.” Corey said, then stepped over towards me as I held Zay heavy self in my arms. He is still sleep as well. Corey gave me a hug too and we began walking towards the luggage department.
“So how is Jinn?” I asked Corey breaking their little conversation.
“She is fine. Ready to drop this baby soon.” he said.
“I forgot she was pregnant.” I said happily.
“Yea. She been killing me lately.” he added as we reached the luggage area as we wait for our bags to reappear on the belt. They finally appeared as they grab the items off. Following out of the building, I readjust Zay in my arms. The air of the south consume me as I walk outside the building and into the sun. A big smile appeared upon my face to the thought of being back here. Although memories flood into my mind from time to time, nothing like thinking of the good times you had.
We got into his vehicle and off we went to the home they still reside in.
“The crib where ya‘ll reside in for a minute is vacant once again, so ya‘ll could have ya‘ll space.” Corey said looking back at me in his rear view mirror.
I smiled at the thought because Marcus just don’t know how excited I am to be back here. 15 minutes later we pulled into the drive way. Leaving our bags in the car momentarily we walked into the home to see Jinn sitting on the sofa watching television. We all walked in and her glowing smile enhanced seeing us enter.
“Look whose here baby.” Corey said closing the door behind.
“Oh my goodness.” both Jinn and I exclaimed as I hand Marcus Zay and approached seeing she is trying to get up.
“Stay right there.” I said stooping down to give her a hug.
After breaking the hug I sat down next to her as she began talking.
“Okay, we have so much to talk about girl.” she said getting excited.
“Your telling me.” I said with a smile.
“Look like we better go get the stuff.” Corey said signaling for Marcus to leave Zay here.
“Zay gonna be here with ya‘ll two. Aight.” Marcus said.
“Yea yea…” I said shooing him out.
_____________________________________________________________________________________
After Jinn and I ran our mouths for a couple of hours we realized the boys never came back in.
“Where you think they went?” I asked peeping out the window.
“Who knows? You know how they are when they get together. Like little kids.” she joked as she continued folding the towels she had to fold. I fed Zay a few snacks Jinn had stored up then put him back to sleep. I strolled back towards the sofa and plopped down on it.
“I still can‘t believe Corey beat Moe ass.” I said laughing on the inside while shaking my head.
“Believe it, but the little tramp deserves it. She was messing around with wrong territory, one everyone knows about.” Jinn said as we suddenly heard a car pulling in the driveway. “Might be them.” she said as she scooted up to get off the sofa and walk over to the window to peep through it.
“Shit naw. Who is that in the new Maxima. That baby is clean.” she whistled. I laughed as I got up to see what she was talking about. As I made it to the window, I noticed Corey pulling in the other driveway.
“That is a clean car. You expecting company?” I asked.
“No.” she said as suddenly the doorbell rang.
“Can you answer that for me. My fat ass loose breath to quickly.” she said shuffling back to the sofa.
I snickered as I walked over. “Who is it?” I asked. “Me.” the sound of Marcus voice thundered through. I opened the door to see Marcus holding up the keys to the Maxima parked outside.
“What is this for?” I asked.
“Our new ride.” he said as Corey pushed Marcus signaling to let him enter. “Move man, I need to check on my babies.” he said brushing past Marcus. Both Marcus and I watch as he kneeled down before Jinn to play with her stomach. I held a smile on my face until Marcus diverted my attention.
“Are you serious?” I asked, snatching the keys away from him and running outside.
There she stood a beautiful 2009 Maxima, freshly coated powder blue with nice custom rims to add to the details.
“Didn‘t want to get anything too fancy. Decided to keep it fresh with this.” he said walking up behind me. “Wanna take a spin in it?” he asked.
“Hell yea I do.” I said sounding like a big kid walking to the driver side. As I opened the door I thought about Zay.
“What about Zay?” I asked.
“He is fine. Corey ass ain‘t going anywhere. Now chauffer me around.” he said with a smirk.
“Get in.” I said as I slipped on to the leather seats that hugged my body. The new scent of a fresh car got me excited. I was ready to hit the streets. I pressed the button to start the car then sat there a moment.
“Where are we going?” I asked looking at him.
“I don‘t know about you but I‘m hungry.” he said.
“Ok.” I said pulling out of the driveway and onto the open rode…
_____________________________________________________________________________________
Sunset slowly began to fall upon us as we walked on the sandy beach, me eating an ice cream cone.
“I like the way your licking that.” Marcus said as I smacked him on his arm from that sarcastic statement. “So why I never get that kind of delight?” he asked.
“Because you always like to take control.” I joked.
As we walked he stepped in front facing towards me causing me to halt in my step.
“You never dared yourself to take control.” he said with a smirk.
“Are you challenging me?” I asked.
“You damn right.” he said seriously.
I laughed then began walking past him. He continued standing there.
“So you not gonna try me?” he asked.
“You don‘t know what I have planned.” I said.
He jogged up behind me scooping me up into his arms walking me back in the opposite direction.
“What are you doing?” I asked.
“Want to see what you have planned.” he said.
I couldn’t stop laughing as the man of my life keeps me wanting more. As he carried me across the beach, I couldn’t help but feel someone. Someone staring at us. Staring at me. it’s a weird suspicion but the feeling wouldn’t go away as we made our way back to the car. I sat there in deep though for a moment until Marcus interrupted my thoughts.
“You ok? You need me to drive?” he asked.
“No…No I got it.” I said shaking away my thoughts. Off I went back into the streets trying to figure out why I felt a weird presence.
Landing in Jacksonville, I stared out of the window at the beautiful scenery. It feels so good to be back in Florida. The pilot warned us we are going to be landing soon, so we stayed seated. I couldn’t wait to get out. Although we are not in Miami, I was just happy to see blue water and sand with beautiful palm trees. I look towards Marcus and Zay who were sleep still. I chuckled a little, then budge Marcus to wake him up. He had awaken as though he was confused.
“We here yet?” he asked.
“Yea, we are about to land soon.” I said then glance back towards the window.
_____________________________________________________________________________________
Walking off of the plane, there stood a male with dreads swaying from one side to the next as though he was looking for someone. We knew who it was as Marcus signaled Corey over. They walked up to each other and greeted with brotherly hugs.
“Man good to see you.” Corey said, then stepped over towards me as I held Zay heavy self in my arms. He is still sleep as well. Corey gave me a hug too and we began walking towards the luggage department.
“So how is Jinn?” I asked Corey breaking their little conversation.
“She is fine. Ready to drop this baby soon.” he said.
“I forgot she was pregnant.” I said happily.
“Yea. She been killing me lately.” he added as we reached the luggage area as we wait for our bags to reappear on the belt. They finally appeared as they grab the items off. Following out of the building, I readjust Zay in my arms. The air of the south consume me as I walk outside the building and into the sun. A big smile appeared upon my face to the thought of being back here. Although memories flood into my mind from time to time, nothing like thinking of the good times you had.
We got into his vehicle and off we went to the home they still reside in.
“The crib where ya‘ll reside in for a minute is vacant once again, so ya‘ll could have ya‘ll space.” Corey said looking back at me in his rear view mirror.
I smiled at the thought because Marcus just don’t know how excited I am to be back here. 15 minutes later we pulled into the drive way. Leaving our bags in the car momentarily we walked into the home to see Jinn sitting on the sofa watching television. We all walked in and her glowing smile enhanced seeing us enter.
“Look whose here baby.” Corey said closing the door behind.
“Oh my goodness.” both Jinn and I exclaimed as I hand Marcus Zay and approached seeing she is trying to get up.
“Stay right there.” I said stooping down to give her a hug.
After breaking the hug I sat down next to her as she began talking.
“Okay, we have so much to talk about girl.” she said getting excited.
“Your telling me.” I said with a smile.
“Look like we better go get the stuff.” Corey said signaling for Marcus to leave Zay here.
“Zay gonna be here with ya‘ll two. Aight.” Marcus said.
“Yea yea…” I said shooing him out.
_____________________________________________________________________________________
After Jinn and I ran our mouths for a couple of hours we realized the boys never came back in.
“Where you think they went?” I asked peeping out the window.
“Who knows? You know how they are when they get together. Like little kids.” she joked as she continued folding the towels she had to fold. I fed Zay a few snacks Jinn had stored up then put him back to sleep. I strolled back towards the sofa and plopped down on it.
“I still can‘t believe Corey beat Moe ass.” I said laughing on the inside while shaking my head.
“Believe it, but the little tramp deserves it. She was messing around with wrong territory, one everyone knows about.” Jinn said as we suddenly heard a car pulling in the driveway. “Might be them.” she said as she scooted up to get off the sofa and walk over to the window to peep through it.
“Shit naw. Who is that in the new Maxima. That baby is clean.” she whistled. I laughed as I got up to see what she was talking about. As I made it to the window, I noticed Corey pulling in the other driveway.
“That is a clean car. You expecting company?” I asked.
“No.” she said as suddenly the doorbell rang.
“Can you answer that for me. My fat ass loose breath to quickly.” she said shuffling back to the sofa.
I snickered as I walked over. “Who is it?” I asked. “Me.” the sound of Marcus voice thundered through. I opened the door to see Marcus holding up the keys to the Maxima parked outside.
“What is this for?” I asked.
“Our new ride.” he said as Corey pushed Marcus signaling to let him enter. “Move man, I need to check on my babies.” he said brushing past Marcus. Both Marcus and I watch as he kneeled down before Jinn to play with her stomach. I held a smile on my face until Marcus diverted my attention.
“Are you serious?” I asked, snatching the keys away from him and running outside.
There she stood a beautiful 2009 Maxima, freshly coated powder blue with nice custom rims to add to the details.
“Didn‘t want to get anything too fancy. Decided to keep it fresh with this.” he said walking up behind me. “Wanna take a spin in it?” he asked.
“Hell yea I do.” I said sounding like a big kid walking to the driver side. As I opened the door I thought about Zay.
“What about Zay?” I asked.
“He is fine. Corey ass ain‘t going anywhere. Now chauffer me around.” he said with a smirk.
“Get in.” I said as I slipped on to the leather seats that hugged my body. The new scent of a fresh car got me excited. I was ready to hit the streets. I pressed the button to start the car then sat there a moment.
“Where are we going?” I asked looking at him.
“I don‘t know about you but I‘m hungry.” he said.
“Ok.” I said pulling out of the driveway and onto the open rode…
_____________________________________________________________________________________
Sunset slowly began to fall upon us as we walked on the sandy beach, me eating an ice cream cone.
“I like the way your licking that.” Marcus said as I smacked him on his arm from that sarcastic statement. “So why I never get that kind of delight?” he asked.
“Because you always like to take control.” I joked.
As we walked he stepped in front facing towards me causing me to halt in my step.
“You never dared yourself to take control.” he said with a smirk.
“Are you challenging me?” I asked.
“You damn right.” he said seriously.
I laughed then began walking past him. He continued standing there.
“So you not gonna try me?” he asked.
“You don‘t know what I have planned.” I said.
He jogged up behind me scooping me up into his arms walking me back in the opposite direction.
“What are you doing?” I asked.
“Want to see what you have planned.” he said.
I couldn’t stop laughing as the man of my life keeps me wanting more. As he carried me across the beach, I couldn’t help but feel someone. Someone staring at us. Staring at me. it’s a weird suspicion but the feeling wouldn’t go away as we made our way back to the car. I sat there in deep though for a moment until Marcus interrupted my thoughts.
“You ok? You need me to drive?” he asked.
“No…No I got it.” I said shaking away my thoughts. Off I went back into the streets trying to figure out why I felt a weird presence.
179 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 15, 2009 8:23 am
golden07
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I just re posted until I come back home later.
180 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 15, 2009 9:11 am
heatRAE!
uppsszzzzzzzzzzzzzzawww i kno she happy......
damn i tell u bout nosey bitches that stalk people lol
181 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 15, 2009 9:20 am
dezzy.baby1
im like so diggin the car...even though i can't see it lmao
wonder who watchin her.
Is it that dude that everybody don't know the name of?!?!
wonder who watchin her.
Is it that dude that everybody don't know the name of?!?!
182 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 15, 2009 9:20 am
dezzy.baby1
yes!!!! 
I GOT A NEW PAGE!!!
{does the new page dance}
I GOT A NEW PAGE!!!
{does the new page dance}
183 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 15, 2009 9:22 am
heatRAE!
up
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hope her pregnacy go wellfor the last few days/weeks/months
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hope her pregnacy go wellfor the last few days/weeks/months
188 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 15, 2009 5:46 pm
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i'll come back and read later after i get me some food!
bumps
bumps
190 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Thu Jul 16, 2009 6:35 pm
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yeah, that car does sound BEAUTIFUL
i think i want it!
i wonder if someone is really watching them,
who could it be?
i can't wait to see what they have planned forever.
they so nasty!!!
i LOVE IT!!!!!
bumpies
i think i want it!
i wonder if someone is really watching them,
who could it be?
i can't wait to see what they have planned forever.
they so nasty!!!
i LOVE IT!!!!!
bumpies
200 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Fri Jul 17, 2009 9:23 am
golden07
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Will add soon...i hope i get my charger soon
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