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»Entice Me™ new add pg.7
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52 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 Wed Jul 22, 2009 4:37 pm
dezzy.baby1
lol....
I'll work on a add in a lil bit
I'll work on a add in a lil bit
55 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:25 pm
pureSEDUCTION
dezzy.baby1 wrote:i need to do a siggy
I believe you meant to say add instead of siggy.
57 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:37 pm
dezzy.baby1
lol ok ok....
I think yall might like this next one....Its going to be staring Trey and Angel...with a pinch of Chanel. lol
I think yall might like this next one....Its going to be staring Trey and Angel...with a pinch of Chanel. lol
58 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:46 pm
pureSEDUCTION
Okay.... (sits patiently waiting for an add)
59 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 Wed Jul 22, 2009 8:39 pm
dezzy.baby1
All that night I thought and replayed Justin’s last words to me. “I said I liked her...but I love you” those nine little words kept repeating themselves over and over again in my head. Even when I got on the phone with Trey. Thinking he would take my mind of off Justin, but it really didn’t work. That night I dreamed about all the things that happened between me and Justin. When we first meet, our first date, first kiss, first everything. By morning I finally realized that I still had strong feelings for my ex. How could I. He was going with my best friend.
“You ok” Trey asked as we sat outside for lunch. I looked up at him and smile.
“Yeah I’m good” I said as I took some fires out of his McDonalds bag.
“So I was asking you and Trey would go out with me and Justin tonight Angel” Chanel asked. That was the first time I noticed she was sitting with us.
“You and Justin” I asked. She shook her head yeah. I looked at Trey and his eyes were on the school. Guess he lost interest when Justin’s name came about. I looked at Chanel. She was patiently awaiting my answer.
“Sure” I said with a smile. I really wanted to see Justin.
“Great” She said with a smile. “Well…I’ll call you later on with the details” she said getting up from the table.
“Where you going” I asked.
“Checking out early. I have a check up to go to in an Hour” She said waving at me and Trey. Once Chanel left I looked at Trey. He still looked a little upset.
“Trey” I said grabbing his hand.
“Yeah” he answered looking down at me.
“I’m ready to go home…can we leave early” I asked getting up from the table. He shook his head yes and then got up from the table.
For some reason the ride to my house was real quiet. Once at a stoplight, I looked over at Trey and he still seemed a little upset. I sighed and put my head down for the rest of the ride home. Once home, we both went into the living room to chill.
“Angel” Trey said as he lowered the volume on the T.V.
“Yeah” I asked lifting my head from his chest to look him in the eye.
“I want to know everything” I said looking down at me. “Every thing about you and Justin” he said adjusting himself on the sofa so that he was facing me completely.
It took me a minute to reply. I thought about everything I was going to tell him then adjusted myself on the sofa as well. I told him everything. How basically Justin was my first everything. He then asked how we broke up.
“When I moved here” I said with my head down. He sighed.
“So basically you still love him” He asked. I couldn’t answer. I really didn’t know the answer to that question but then again I did.
“You still love this nigga!” Trey said standing up.
“No Trey…I love you” I said eyes watering. He shook his head.
“From what your telling me…And from what I see…You don’t know who you love” He said looking down at me. “When you find out…Let me know something…but for now…I can’t do this.”He said walking towards the door.
“Do what Trey” I said with tears falling from my eyes. “Trey” I said grabbing onto his hand as her reached for the door knob. He looked at me then turned away.
“Me and you” He whispered. “I’m not going to compete with him” He said. After that he walked out. Leaving me there with tears rolling down my face, looking at a closed door.
“You ok” Trey asked as we sat outside for lunch. I looked up at him and smile.
“Yeah I’m good” I said as I took some fires out of his McDonalds bag.
“So I was asking you and Trey would go out with me and Justin tonight Angel” Chanel asked. That was the first time I noticed she was sitting with us.
“You and Justin” I asked. She shook her head yeah. I looked at Trey and his eyes were on the school. Guess he lost interest when Justin’s name came about. I looked at Chanel. She was patiently awaiting my answer.
“Sure” I said with a smile. I really wanted to see Justin.
“Great” She said with a smile. “Well…I’ll call you later on with the details” she said getting up from the table.
“Where you going” I asked.
“Checking out early. I have a check up to go to in an Hour” She said waving at me and Trey. Once Chanel left I looked at Trey. He still looked a little upset.
“Trey” I said grabbing his hand.
“Yeah” he answered looking down at me.
“I’m ready to go home…can we leave early” I asked getting up from the table. He shook his head yes and then got up from the table.
For some reason the ride to my house was real quiet. Once at a stoplight, I looked over at Trey and he still seemed a little upset. I sighed and put my head down for the rest of the ride home. Once home, we both went into the living room to chill.
“Angel” Trey said as he lowered the volume on the T.V.
“Yeah” I asked lifting my head from his chest to look him in the eye.
“I want to know everything” I said looking down at me. “Every thing about you and Justin” he said adjusting himself on the sofa so that he was facing me completely.
It took me a minute to reply. I thought about everything I was going to tell him then adjusted myself on the sofa as well. I told him everything. How basically Justin was my first everything. He then asked how we broke up.
“When I moved here” I said with my head down. He sighed.
“So basically you still love him” He asked. I couldn’t answer. I really didn’t know the answer to that question but then again I did.
“You still love this nigga!” Trey said standing up.
“No Trey…I love you” I said eyes watering. He shook his head.
“From what your telling me…And from what I see…You don’t know who you love” He said looking down at me. “When you find out…Let me know something…but for now…I can’t do this.”He said walking towards the door.
“Do what Trey” I said with tears falling from my eyes. “Trey” I said grabbing onto his hand as her reached for the door knob. He looked at me then turned away.
“Me and you” He whispered. “I’m not going to compete with him” He said. After that he walked out. Leaving me there with tears rolling down my face, looking at a closed door.
60 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 Wed Jul 22, 2009 8:47 pm
golden07
Admin
WOWTrey meant that.
I love this story man...
I want to know whats gonna
happen now.
Wonder how Chanel...No JUSTIN going to react
when she found out Angel and Trey split.
61 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 Wed Jul 22, 2009 9:39 pm
pureSEDUCTION
All is far in love and war.
So there are a few casualities(Trey and Angel's relations and Chanel and Justin's friendship) but then everyone gets over it because we love Justin and Angel!!! Lol.
So I'm a little mean but I love those two together...I wanna see how Justin AND Nel are going to act.
So there are a few casualities(Trey and Angel's relations and Chanel and Justin's friendship) but then everyone gets over it because we love Justin and Angel!!! Lol.
So I'm a little mean but I love those two together...I wanna see how Justin AND Nel are going to act.
65 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:19 pm
dezzy.baby1
man wats goin on with my siggy thingy
66 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:41 pm
dezzy.baby1
working on the add....
It features a scene created by our very own Janae!!
It features a scene created by our very own Janae!!
67 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:43 pm
golden07
Admin
What you mean what's wrong with it? It won't appear, you have to look under preferences and make sure its checked that it would appear.
68 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:44 pm
dezzy.baby1
oh yeah this add is going to be extra long lol 
70 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:46 pm
dezzy.baby1
Oh ok thanks Nae Nae lol new nickname on deck
71 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:49 pm
pureSEDUCTION
Yeppp. Nae Nae. Ohhhh, did I read extra long add? *does happy dance* YAY!
72 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:55 pm
dezzy.baby1
Angel.
“Hello” I said as I tried my hardest to stop the tears from falling.
“Angel what’s wrong sounds like your crying” Chanel said threw the other end. I didn’t want her to know what was going on.
“Girl I’m watching Seven Pounds” I lied. “What’s up?” I questioned as I wiped away tears.
“I was calling to let you know that I have to cancel our double date night…My grandmother just went into the hospital…so we going spend the night up there with her” She said. I was glad in a way because I didn’t have to tell her that I couldn’t make it because of Trey.
“Aww…”I said trying to sound disappointed. “It’s understandable though call me later then” I said not really wanting to talk.
“Ok..I got to call Justin and tell him” she said before hanging up. I said ok then hung up.
A couple minutes passed and I was still staring at the wall. I looked at my phone then back at the wall. Then back at the phone. I picked it up and started dialing the number.
Justin
I watch as Angel run towards my car, quickly getting in. She didn’t say anything as she close the door and look ahead. When she called me earlier, I could hear a sense of hurt in her voice, but I didn’t bother to ask her as I slowly drove up the street. Turning up my volume to release the awkward silence in the car, the song by Maxwell came on. Traffic is now smooth and the silence still invade the space between Angel and myself. Pretty wings played on the speakers as I glance towards Angel who had tears streaming down her heart shape face. We were not too far from my house, so I tried to stay focus looking forward, but she know I can’t stand to see her cry. Speeding cause me to make it to my house quicker as I pulled into the driveway. Turning the car off we sat there in silence a bit more. I turned her way so that she can look at me and say something, but she didn’t move.
“Angel. What‘s wrong with you?” I asked.
She just shook her head.
“Don‘t give me that. I know you too well, what‘s the deal?” I asked as she finally turned my way tears smearing her makeup down to her cheeks. “Your boyfriend said something to you?” I asked getting a bit upset being that I hate the thought of her having another dude in her life as it is.
She didn’t bother as though she was motionless. I got out of my car slamming the door and walk to her side opening the door. She still didn’t move, so I picked her petite size frame up and she automatically wrapped her arms around my neck. She was acting like a baby who feelings just got hurt while resting her head upon my chest. Approaching the door, I struggled a bit to unlock the door with her in my arms, but I manage opening the door to a dark room. She slipped out of my hands standing up on her own as I could see her shadow wiping away her teary eyes. Flicking the switch on, the house stood to be empty. She glance around, but I took the lead heading towards my room.
“You can make yourself comfortable.” I said not looking back.
Footsteps seemed to follow behind me, so I look behind me to see her following me.
“I don‘t allow babies in my room.” I said, but she continued walking behind me. Approaching my bedroom door, I stopped placing my hand around the doorknob. “Are you going to tell me your issue when you come in or do I need to take you back home?” I asked before opening it.
“We will talk.” she respond.
I nod my head and open the door letting her step in first. She slowly enter looking around to familiarize herself. “Have a seat.” I suggested towards the bed as she followed my advice. I captured her fragrance in my nostrils as she swayed he hips to and fro. She look so good in her tight apple bottom jeans and white collard shit that revealed her pierced belly button. I continued standing there waiting for her to speak.
“Well, Trey and I broke up.” she finally said. “And its because of you.” she added.
It took me back when she said that because the way she made Trey seem as though that was her heart.
“What about me?” I asked, walking towards the bed.
“I don‘t know. Something I can‘t figure out myself.” she said looking up towards me. “As hard as I try to get you to escape my mind, your still there, blocking away my feelings for Trey. When I see you with my friend, I think that we are suppose to switch places so that I could be near you.” she confessed as a smile trailed up to my face. “Why are you smiling?” she asked.
“Because you blew me off when I tried to tell you I still had feelings for you and now you come back to me with this. Is it because you really want Trey or me?” I asked her.
“Justin, I‘m serious about you and me.” she said, looking in my eyes. “I never gotten over you.” she added looking off at the time. My finger traced the side of her face to her chin, lifting her head towards me so that I can get a glimpse of her light brown eyes. Leaning in closer, I let my kiss answer her troubling questions. Still after all these years, my feelings for her only escalated.
We stood up, she standing a few inches shorter than me. Our kisses grew hungrier for the passion we held inside as I want to give her my all. My hands gripped onto her round ass feeling so good in my hands. It grew since the last time I really seen her and now I am ready to see it now. She pushed me back onto my bed as I knew a shock expression land upon my face. She never was aggressive about anything, but tonight I am seeing a new Angel. Turning around away from me, I sat up on my elbows observing her. It look as though she was unbuttoning her shirt, as I watch the brown sugar coated honey before me reveal her back. She continue facing opposite away from me as now I see her unbuttoning her pants, sliding the dark denim jeans from around her ripe ass down to the floor. She kicked them to the side after sliding off her flip flops. Her suppose to be boy cut panties showed her plump ass even more. She turned around staring me in my eyes as it reveal many thoughts going through her mind. I stood up before her, pulling her bare skin against me. Her soft delicate skin was something I long to touch and the scent of her body smell of sweetness.
“Everything will be ok. I got you.” I said.
She look up at me with a sincere smile. I kissed her sweet lips walking her up against my wall. Her back pressed against it while I had a bunch of things running through my mind on what I want to do with her. I took off my shirt tossing it to the side as our body heat molded together. I began kissing the right side of her neck until I could hear her voice in my ear.
“Justin…” her soft voice mellowed in my ear.
“Yes.” I said.
“Take your time. I want tonight to be special.” she said.
From those words my lips pressed against her left side on her neck being that is her spot. Suckling on it until I left my mark. I began trailing kisses down to her chest where my hands began fumbling with the hooks of her bra. Unsnapping it, her breast were released for me to do as my heart desire. She removed her bra and that’s when I sucked on her breast until she began rocking her hips and pushing my head ever closer to her. Again I moved lower until I found myself on my knees. I pulled her panties down revealing herself to me. She kicked the to the side. I lift one leg up putting it across my shoulder while the other remain on the floor. First I dipped one finger in to see how moist she was. Girl was W.E.T. I look up to see she was gripping onto her breast as though I did something yet. I smirk, then emerged my face to her womanhood tasting the sweetness of her folds. I devoured her until I can feel her leg trembling against my shoulder. On the inside I was smiling knowing I was pleasing her in all the right areas, her moans escaping from her mouth grew louder and louder causing me to exert myself even more. She finally came, almost drowning me in her goodness as I consumed everything. I licked my lips then stood up wiping my mouth with my forearm. She held a big smile then pulled me in kissing my sticky lips. She released and licked her lips.
“Always wondered what I taste like.” she said as I laughed.
“Freak.” I mumbled as I reached over to my dresser to grab a condom from the drawer.
“You bring the best out of me.” She said bring a smirk onto my face. I unbuckled my belt causing my jeans to get baggier and finally unbuttoning my jeans to where they fell, leaving me in my boxers. I kicked then to the side, the slid off my boxers to put on the condom.
We stood there naked as she watch every move I made. After slipping it on, I grabbed her thighs lifting her up on the wall as she surround her arms around my neck for security. I guide myself into her sleek walls feeling the warmth and tightness around my manhood. Girl was still tight just like I remember. Her manicured nails dug into my back slightly as her eyes closed tightly from the ride. I slowly had her going up and down until she began to help me out as well. Her back rubbed against the wall, while I had her going faster and faster. Her moans were taking me to new heights. She was calling out for me, and I want to give her more. Take her to places she have never been that no one else could take her. I lifted her off the wall, I still deep within her and bringing her to the bed where I gently placed her with me on top. I grinded into her with more force until she came and as did I. She was hook now. How did I know? Because she was already tired, but she didn’t know I had more for her lil ass.
I climbed on top of her and started to kiss her neck. I was satisfied when I heard her moan I then moved to the other side of her neck. I was just about to leave my mark when I felt her hands pushing against my chest.
“What’s wrong” I said looking into her eyes.
“I..No…This is wrong” She said moving to get from under me.
“What are you talking about” I said getting up to let her up.
“She loves you Justin…I can’t believe I did this” She said climbing out the bed. “And I still have feelings for Trey” She said looking back at me. She grabbed her clothing from off the floor and ran into the bathroom. I shook my head and fell back on bed.
74 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 Thu Jul 23, 2009 11:01 pm
pureSEDUCTION
WTF Angel???
I would have NEVER gotten out that bed. After it was over I woulda been like, "Justin, do you think we made a mistake?" And I might feel guilty when I saw Chanel but.... Pssh! Lisa would have been enjoying the moment and I just noticed....She gone push away from him after they freaked. She think she slick. AFTER she done got the candy bar she gone say it's wrong.... Hmmph. You gone head Angel!
And you Justin!!!!! Thumbs up on the skills.
I would have NEVER gotten out that bed. After it was over I woulda been like, "Justin, do you think we made a mistake?" And I might feel guilty when I saw Chanel but.... Pssh! Lisa would have been enjoying the moment and I just noticed....She gone push away from him after they freaked. She think she slick. AFTER she done got the candy bar she gone say it's wrong.... Hmmph. You gone head Angel!
And you Justin!!!!! Thumbs up on the skills.
75 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 Thu Jul 23, 2009 11:10 pm
golden07
Admin
Lol...I love that scene 
Man what in the world
is wrong with Angel...
I guess it was too much
chocolate...lol...whats gonna
happen next.
Man what in the world
is wrong with Angel...
I guess it was too much
chocolate...lol...whats gonna
happen next.
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