A Brother's Secret

I kinda like Gian at first but now i'm at a loss for words! (Bomb add by the way)...Ok...

Jose: I thought he would be the one to do it but he is a seemingly good guy.

Mama: It's gonna be alright. Forgiving does not mean that you have to forget. Everybody cries sometimes.

Rii: Girl boom! Don't force kids on a man. Pretending to be happy won't save your marriage and kids won't make him stay(#FACT)

Gian: Like 4real G??!! You did what now?? How could you? Damn shame that the temptation was that bad. But you grown so you know what you are getting yourself into. You can't turn a hoe into a house wife dude, this ain't #Pretty Women.

Kahi: You a bad bitch, but I hope you know what you're doing. And, I think that when you were referring to him getting "caught up" you were referring more to yourself than his wife.

Moral to this scene is: Everything that glitters ain't gold

O.M.G Im Loveing This One.....Add More a.s.a.p

EBz Perradize wrote:
I kinda like Gian at first but now i'm at a loss for words! (Bomb add by the way)...Ok...

Jose: I thought he would be the one to do it but he is a seemingly good guy.

Mama: It's gonna be alright. Forgiving does not mean that you have to forget. Everybody cries sometimes.

Rii: Girl boom! Don't force kids on a man. Pretending to be happy won't save your marriage and kids won't make him stay(#FACT)

Gian: Like 4real G??!! You did what now?? How could you? Damn shame that the temptation was that bad. But you grown so you know what you are getting yourself into. You can't turn a hoe into a house wife dude, this ain't #Pretty Women.

Kahi: You a bad bitch, but I hope you know what you're doing. And, I think that when you were referring to him getting "caught up" you were referring more to yourself than his wife.

Moral to this scene is: Everything that glitters ain't gold

damn ryt honey! i just love yur reviews!!!

i thouqht i would likee Kahi . lol
but she a whoree ! lol && G fukked up
biq time !
i likee Joseph a lot !

Wow...where to begin

Aight...Gian really messed up
I didn't realize his ex was such
a hoe...at first it seem as though Gian
was going to make the first move, better yet
Jose, but I see we got a pyscho b***** on da
loose...He has to face the consequences...For all
that he might come out with some sort of disease
in the long run fooling around with skanks like her...

His mom basically speaks the truth, she notices things
beforehand that the boys should listen too
and I like that about her. She reminds me of my mom
and grandmother...

Ri...I don't want to mispell her name, but Gian's wife
obviously is sweet, but don't know how to tame her man.
Don't tell him you want kids chick, keep that negro guessing.
Thats why he didn't touch you in a hot minute...lol

Joseph...he's a slick one...He laying low since he made it home
but I know he got something up is sleeve he just ain't putting out
yet...Loving this story...Add asap...

O and I would love to be in any of your stories...that goes for anybody...lol

New Page = New Add

Boo Yah!!!

-∂εfιηε sεx- "тяεy" wrote:

EBz Perradize wrote:
I kinda like Gian at first but now i'm at a loss for words! (Bomb add by the way)...Ok...

Jose: I thought he would be the one to do it but he is a seemingly good guy.

Mama: It's gonna be alright. Forgiving does not mean that you have to forget. Everybody cries sometimes.

Rii: Girl boom! Don't force kids on a man. Pretending to be happy won't save your marriage and kids won't make him stay(#FACT)

Gian: Like 4real G??!! You did what now?? How could you? Damn shame that the temptation was that bad. But you grown so you know what you are getting yourself into. You can't turn a hoe into a house wife dude, this ain't #Pretty Women.

Kahi: You a bad bitch, but I hope you know what you're doing. And, I think that when you were referring to him getting "caught up" you were referring more to yourself than his wife.

Moral to this scene is: Everything that glitters ain't gold

damn ryt honey! i just love yur reviews!!!

Thanx sweetie! U just keep those fingers moving!

golden07 wrote:Wow...where to begin

Aight...Gian really messed up
I didn't realize his ex was such
a hoe...at first it seem as though Gian
was going to make the first move, better yet
Jose, but I see we got a pyscho b***** on da
loose...He has to face the consequences...For all
that he might come out with some sort of disease
in the long run fooling around with skanks like her...

His mom basically speaks the truth, she notices things
beforehand that the boys should listen too
and I like that about her. She reminds me of my mom
and grandmother...

Ri...I don't want to mispell her name, but Gian's wife
obviously is sweet, but don't know how to tame her man.
Don't tell him you want kids chick, keep that negro guessing.
Thats why he didn't touch you in a hot minute...lol

Joseph...he's a slick one...He laying low since he made it home
but I know he got something up is sleeve he just ain't putting out
yet...Loving this story...Add asap...

Janae yu are on the money! Pycho, correct. And in Pulse, yur on the money too
dont wanna give away too much, but yur on point girl! lol uppz!

this is a really good story!!
Kahi is about as ratchet as they come, and Gian ... lawd don't get me started.
Jose is a good guy .... right? lol he is so far.
But Gian's wife needs to lay off the pressure about having kids. Their marriage is about as strong as watered down tea.

i want more of this story...where is it

I have to type the add for Pulse; i think i have this story's next add on the other computer. I'll see what i can do today

happie late valentines day everyone!

-Joseph D. Cartel
House Guest


Jose got out of the car with Gian, it was at least 6:45 AM in the morning, Gian had to be up early to go with his mother for arrangements, and Jose had to get settled. Jose walked into his brother's home, “Damn, G. Hook me up where you working at” he said. Gian laughed, “So what were you doing back in LA?” Jose knew the conversation would come up, and he had prepared for it. “A lil this here and there, nothing too business like. Just tryna' figure out what the hell I was good at” he replied, though he had programed what he would say. “Find anything?” Gian asked as he walked through the halls, showing Jose to his room. “Nah, not something I could do forever” he said, smiling at the thought of his odd occupation. “Well, I guess you got plenty of time to think about it,” Gian opened the door to the guest room. “The bathroom's down the hall, we're right upstairs. This ain’t no long time stay, you a grown ass man and I'ma treat you like that. Respect my wife, me and my house, and you good, feelings mutual.” Jose nodded as he placed one of his bags on the bed, “I could get use to this shit,” he smiled. “Don't,” Gian said in a serious tone, “I gotta go pick up mama, still gotta get a few things arranged for tomorrow, you sure you're not coming?” Jose shook his head, “Nah, think I'ma crash, I ain’t get enough sleep last night.” Gian dapped his brother before heading upstairs, then out to his mother's house.

Of course Jose wasn't about to sleep, he could never go back to sleep once he was up. Flipping through the channels, Jose settled on a re-run of The Game. Two shows later, Jose was easing through the hall, looking for the bathroom. Instead, he ended up meeting Jasmyn as she came down the stairs, dressed in her Paul Frank monkey night pants, and a baby blue cami that hugged her waist and complemented her chest area.

“Hey, I though you were asleep,” she said.

“Nah, couldn't. I guess we were never properly introduced," Jose said.

"I guess not.” She laughed

“So how long you and G been married?”

“Three years,” Jasmyn said with a smile.

“That's good, that's good”

“You hungry? I was just about to make breakfast for Skylar and I before he wakes up”

“Oh okay, aye...is Layla coming by later?”

“Yeah, in a lil while, why?” Jasmyn smirked.

“Just askin” Jose said

“Uh huh” Jasmyn said as she proceeded to the kitchen

“Oh, where's the bathroom?”

“Two doors down”

“Aight, thanks”

It felt good to empty his bladder after all the Cream Sodas he had drunken last night. Jose walked back to his room and searched for clothes to wear. Soon after, he was eating waffles, eggs & sausage. “You know about what time Gian coming back?” he asked.

“No, you can call him and see” Jasmyn said as she headed upstairs to get ready for work. Jose nodded as she left the kitchen. After washing out his plate, Jose grabbed his phone, only to realize, he didn't have Gian's number. Going up the stairs, the sound of running shower water echoed. One mind said come back later, another was eager to find out what treasures the wifey held. Easing the door open, the coast was clear, taking a few more steps, he could see Jasmyn undressing through the fogged out mirror. His dick told him to get closer, but his head told him to turn around...

Jose stepped forward, looking at her frame from behind. She pulled her hair up in a ball, grabbing her towel, she wrapped it around her body. Turning around, she met Jose's chest. “Joseph” she spoke softly as she gripped the towel tighter and backed away from him. “Please,” Jose spoke in a low though sexy tone as he grabbed Jasmyn's waist, pulling her closer to him, “call me Jose.” Jose planted a wet kiss on her pink lips. He had been dying to taste her the moment he saw her; now was his chance. Jose cupped her ass as he pushed her against the marble vanity. “Jose” Jasmyn whispered in his ear as he sucked on her neck. “Jose!” she screamed out. “Jose!”

Jose jumped out of his skin. “Yeah!?” he asked scarcely. There he was laying ontop of his bed.

“You okay in there?” Jas asked.

“Y-yeah I'm good, was up?” he asked, trying to 'play-it-off'.

“Oh, well, Layla's here” she said in a tone that he could tell she was smiling. Jose smiled until he realized he was holding his erect penis in his right hand.

“Shit” Jose spoken under his breath, “Alright, I'll uh, I'll be out in a minute!” he yelled back. Jose laid back in bed, puzzled; what the fuck was that about?




enjoy! apologies for typos!

Yay you added, and aww man he having
wet dreams...uh oh...something
bout to go down that Gian ain't going to
like with his cheating ass...lol...add asap

golden07 wrote:something
bout to go down that Gian ain't going to
like with his cheating ass...lol...add asap

lol ikr

lmao! lol joseph and gian need to switch women!

Dang!! Wet dreams in the daytime? He got it bad like Usher! Lolx...great add

EBz Perradize wrote:Dang!! Wet dreams in the daytime? He got it bad like Usher! Lolx...great add

lol

adding todayy!!!!!!

the next adds are gonna be kinda...different i guess lol. it'll all come together thoughh. =)


making a few adjustments. it's 5:00 here....gimme till like 5:30? Yeahhh =)

ilya! [i love you all!]

wow that's deep!!!

where's everybody at? =(

&& thankz giggles!

Jaz...I'm finally back, but still in pain. I
have to get my wisdom teeth out. And I
see the board has gone dead...Time for a
fresh look...Any suggestion?

golden07 wrote:Jaz...I'm finally back, but still in pain. I
have to get my wisdom teeth out. And I
see the board has gone dead...Time for a
fresh look...Any suggestion?

awww poor thing! D=
hope yu feel better.
they gave me tylenol 3 with codine
when i had tooth problems; it was so strong
i cuddnt tell when my eyes were blinking lol.
It took the pain away though. No bad effects
or nothing, just takes like 5/10 mins to get use
to.


&& As for board themes,
had trey, nicki, drake, ri, & halle already...
I'm thinkin somethn like LLoyd or J. Cole. Maybe a
Drake and J. Cole Banner?? With the city behind them?
Throw some red & silver color in there...i like tht.
Bieber? Make it light but colorful. Im liking both ideas.
Yur choice tho!

Thanks chick...Bout to work on it. I'm glad for your
support and hopefully others will fall back into play...
Gotta keep it alive