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Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Icon_minitimeThu Jun 18, 2015 10:33 am by J'Adore

» Brand |Manuel and Jas|
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301Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Mon Jul 27, 2009 11:12 pm

golden07

golden07
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SORRY JANAE I STILL LOVE IT....JUST WANTED TO
STATE MY OPINION

No I'm glad you stated your opinion
I was just kidding with you
But I know you ready
for drama to pop off soon
Believe me...Its in store lol!

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302Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Tue Jul 28, 2009 11:45 am

MzMoThug

MzMoThug

Yea, I Like Drama... Sometimes

303Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Tue Jul 28, 2009 7:41 pm

sinqlebby !

sinqlebby !

golden07 wrote:
SORRY JANAE I STILL LOVE IT....JUST WANTED TO
STATE MY OPINION

No I'm glad you stated your opinion
I was just kidding with you
But I know you ready
for drama to pop off soon
Believe me...Its in store lol!

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AND THATS WHY I {{{{LOVE}}}} THIS FLIPPIN STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

304Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Tue Jul 28, 2009 9:39 pm

heatRAE!

heatRAE!

JUST CAUGHT UP WOOWWW



HAHA MOE GOT TOLD


AND MARCUS IS FNNY I THINK IM LIKIN HIM
'ALOT'

305Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Tue Jul 28, 2009 9:50 pm

golden07

golden07
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Chapter 7 |Caught|

Once again I’ve been awaken from my sleep, but this time a piece has been added to the puzzle. Claritha. Who is she? Why do I keep having incomplete dreams about someone I don’t know about. I curled up next to Marcus trying to convince myself to go back to sleep…

Awakening to an empty bed, I took one long stretch to see it is now after noon. I got out of the bed into the bathroom, then into the living to find that I am alone. Walking into Zay’s bedroom, he was not there. It made me no difference, I walk over to the sofa and plopped down turning on the television. Sitting the remote down, I notice a paper with my name on it. Checking it out, it’s a list of names Corey want to invite with their name and address. Thumbing through the list, he had about 50 major names he want to invite. Good, because two hundred is an overload. At the bottom of the list, I notice the date of August 2. Its barely two weeks. I need to get moving.
_____________________________________________________________________________________

While on the phone with the last of the guest, Marcus and Zay walk through the door. Once getting off the phone with the person, I got up to greet the boys.

“So what ya‘ll did today?” I asked.
“Finding shit for that baby shower.” he said as Zay walked over towards me.
“Cake huge…” he said happily.
“Oh, you helped pick out a cake?” I asked lifting him up.
“Yea…” he said excitedly.

I smiled walking to the sofa making myself comfortable next to Marcus.

“So I don‘t have to get the food, only invitations right?” I asked.
“And decorate. He picked out a nice place. I guess I will take you over there later on. What you say?” he asked.
“Sounds good to me.” I said.

My phone began ringing in the background, so I sat Zay down to grab it in the kitchen.

“Hello.” I answered quickly.
“What‘s up beautiful.” the sound of the familiar voice shot through the phone.
“May I ask who is speaking?” I asked peeking my head around to see Marcus got up with Zay heading to the bathroom.
“So you want to dis me like that now. You know who I am, don‘t play.” he said.
“What do you want?” I asked in a low tone.
“All I ask is for a moment of your time. I miss you baby girl.” he said.
“How do you know I‘m down here?” I asked.
“Don‘t worry about that. Just want you to know I plan to see you real soon.” he said, then the call end.
“What the…” I said aloud. I closed my phone and just stared at it confused. He plan to see me soon. What the hell?

Sitting my phone down, I walk towards the bedroom to find something to put on. Scoping out my wardrobe in the closet, I hear Zay running in the room with Marcus behind him.

“Who was that on the phone?” he asked.
“Telemarketers.” I lied.
“I thought we cleared that up a while back.” he said not wanting to leave the subject.
“I know, but some of those bastards learn to maneuver around the matter.” I said grabbing a fit from the closet while biting on my bottom lip.

I could feel Marcus burning a hole in my neck. He could see my lie right through me.

“Zay, go clean your mess in your room.” he said keeping his eyes on me.

Damn man…What in the hell will he ask me next. Zay scuffled out while Marcus close the door behind him. We stood there, in awkward silence, I guess him trying to figure me out. Footsteps trailed behind me, so I turned around.

“So why the lying?” he asked.
“What you talking about?” I asked in defense walking pass him to the bed to place my outfit on the bed.
“Do you think I‘m stupid? I know you better than you know your damn self.” he said.
“Marcus, why you getting so upset? You act like I‘m trying to hide something from you.” I said.
“Why I‘m getting so upset is because I fell in love with a female who decides to sit in my fucking face and lie about dumb ass shit. So I‘m gonna ask you, who were you on the phone with?” he asked once more.
“If you must know, my ex called me. Before you jump into conclusions its not what you think.” I said already defending myself.
“So let me get this straight, its not what I have on my mind, but you had to lie about who you were on the phone with just like you couldn‘t tell me you went to the fucking strip club.” he said in a calm manner.

I turned around to face him.

“And who told you that?” I asked.
“Corey told me. At least Jinn ass told Corey where she was going. And I specifically told you to tell me in my face and you had the audacity to lie in my damn face then kiss my lips.” he said with a smirk of anger on his face.
“I cannot believe we are arguing over some dumb ass shit like this. Marcus…” I began to say, but he cut me short.
“Yea, but it‘s dumb ass shit that came from your lips. You know what, its all good. Obviously I‘m not worthy enough for you to tell me a little truth of the matter. And I even waited to see if you was going to tell me. I should have heed my advice a while ago.” he said walking towards the door.
“Where you think your going? We ain‘t through.” I said.

No comment, he walked out the door leaving me in a daze being this is our first real argument in a long time.

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306Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Tue Jul 28, 2009 10:03 pm

pureSEDUCTION

pureSEDUCTION

Clare you know not to lie to him!!

307Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Tue Jul 28, 2009 10:21 pm

tylender09

tylender09

cheers

srry i haven't been up here in awhile and ggggggggggggggggggggreat!!! lol
bumpii bumpii bumpii bumpii

http://www.myspace.com/tylicious09

308Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Tue Jul 28, 2009 10:26 pm

golden07

golden07
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lol...thanks yall

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309Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Tue Jul 28, 2009 10:56 pm

heatRAE!

heatRAE!

DAMN SHE IS ONE STUPID WOMEN


IM SO DISSAPOINTED IN HER LOL NOW SHE COULDA LIED BETTA THEN TAT LOL JK BUT DAMN Y LIE BOUT THAT SHIT I WOULDA TLD HIM THE FIRST TIME DUDE CALLED

310Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Tue Jul 28, 2009 10:56 pm

heatRAE!

heatRAE!

UPSSZS pig

311Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Tue Jul 28, 2009 10:57 pm

heatRAE!

heatRAE!

199.............

312Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Tue Jul 28, 2009 10:57 pm

heatRAE!

heatRAE!

200 YAAAAY I MADE 2 HUNDREED POSTS FOR ME WHILE I WAS IN UR POST LOL

313Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 29, 2009 11:05 am

yesimHER*

yesimHER*

Shocked





what the fuck clair ?!!!!
she lying about unnecessary shit.
i dont belive this, obviously he knew somethin, why didnt she just tell him?
i cant even understand why she WOULDNT tell him. its not like she was cheating
he was stalking HER.
if anything shed want marcus to know so he could kick his ass!


curses clair out: Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad

p.s make me remember the strip club incident.

314Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 29, 2009 11:54 am

sinqlebby !

sinqlebby !

I LOVED THE ADD JANAE...VERYYYY UNEXPECTED...U ALWAYS
SATISFY ME LOL....BUT CAN U REFRESH MY MEMORY
OF THE WHOLE CLARITHA SCENE...LIKE WHERE DID
SHE HEAR THAT NAME????AND I WONDER WHO THAT IS.......
BUMPZ GIRL AND ADD SOON PLEAZE

315Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 29, 2009 12:45 pm

MzMoThug

MzMoThug

I Knew That Shit Was Gonna Bite Her In The Ass. She Shouldn't Lie 2 Him... He's 2 Good At Tellin The Truth From Lies

316Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 29, 2009 2:33 pm

golden07

golden07
Admin

lol...ok ok...
First question, strip club incident happened in
chapter six when her and Jinn went out.

And second question, about Claritha
in the last part of the first story
she seen a birth certificate with
someone who goes by the name Claritha
and she can't stop thinking about it because
they were both born on the same day so
she wants to know why Javier had it on
his desk and who is Claritha...

Now I can finally breathe...lol

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317Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 29, 2009 2:34 pm

golden07

golden07
Admin

New Page For me Smile cheers

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318Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 29, 2009 2:40 pm

golden07

golden07
Admin

Decided to give ya'll a small add for now Smile Gotta love me hahaha...

Chapter 8 |Friendly Advice|

Jinn called me a little after Marcus left, but I didn’t bother to answer it. I’m pissed. Not at him for being mad at me, but for myself. I know how he is. I know he doesn’t respect liars let alone be around liars because of his mother, and yet I stooped so low trying to protect what we had going on. I did make myself seem as though more was going on than in actuality. I hope my stupidity will not ruin our relationship. Zay sat in the front room dazed into the television as though he tried ignoring everything that just happened. I don’t blame him, he shouldn’t have to hear this. I walked over plopping down next to him on the sofa.

“Where daddy go?” he asked.
“Out.” I simply said relieving myself with a heavy sigh.
“You and him fight?” he asked looking up at me with his deep brown eyes.

I smiled trying to disguise the pain.

“Only an argument baby. He will be back.” I said.

My stomach rumbled being that I haven’t ate any breakfast.

“Hungry?” I asked as he nod his head. “Me too.” I said getting up to see what we had in the kitchen. As I approach the kitchen a knock at my door sound. I decide to answer only to find Jinn stepping in.

She didn’t say anything, I guess especially after seeing my aggravated facial expression.

“What brings you over?” I asked already knowing the question.
“Don‘t play dumb. I see my girl is going through some things so I am here for moral support. Now what happened?” she asked.
“Have a seat in the kitchen.” I said dragging in there myself. This is no way to start your day I can tell you that much. I walked in the kitchen while she sat on a bar stool by the bar of the kitchen.
“He seemed really pissed. He told Corey come on and Corey jumped. Corey don‘t jump to stuff like that unless something is wrong.”
“Yea well, I can tell you he isn‘t taking things lightly.” I said looking out to see Zay still watching television. I’m going to have to get back on my routine and give him something constructive to do. I glanced back over towards the bar and noticed the paper with Jinn’s baby shower information sitting on the table. I walked out grabbing the paperwork so she wouldn’t see it.

“Let me put this in my room right quick.” I said walking into the bedroom quickly then back out.

“So…get to it.” she said with her nosey self, her being the cause of some of my problems involved with the strip club.

“Ok…for one. Why you told Corey we went to the strip club?” I asked.
“Because I‘m not ashamed to let him know where I am going. Is that the reason why? For taking you somewhere to enjoy yourself?” I asked.
“No but that is part of it. Its all because of a phone call. No telling what he thinks but my ex been calling me lately saying weird things. I don‘t know, I didn‘t want Marcus to worry about it but it just blew up in my face.” I said.
“From what I know about Marcus, games is something he does not play. And from what you just told me, that was child‘s play. People feelings get hurt when the truth come out, but it hurts worse when you lie about it. My advice to you is make things straight now. Get everything off your chest now. You have a good man, don‘t lose him girl.” she said with sincerity.

I know I have a good man, but now is how do I get him back.

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319Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 29, 2009 2:46 pm

pureSEDUCTION

pureSEDUCTION

Hmmmmm, CLARE, let's start by never lying again!!!!

Lol, Marcus, Come back homeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. To Clare and Zay....They NEEEEED you.

320Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 29, 2009 2:55 pm

golden07

golden07
Admin

lol...i know, we need you MARCUS I love you We all love you...lmao

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321Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 29, 2009 3:05 pm

pureSEDUCTION

pureSEDUCTION

Lmao!!!!

Nae, you are something serious!

322Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 29, 2009 7:12 pm

yesimHER*

yesimHER*

DAMN I SKIPPED THE WHOLE STRIP CLUB CHAPTER. I HAD TO GO BACK & WAS CONFUSED AS A MOFO.

any who ima bout to read this new add. thanks for writing so i have something to come home too ahahah:)

323Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 29, 2009 7:17 pm

yesimHER*

yesimHER*

wow "listen at jenn" (lol) givin out good advice!


clair really blowin it these days. wtf she lied about going to the strip club for? men go to the strip club all the time. what could marcus doo beat her? lol

home girl needa get her shiz together before i come scoop his ass up!! lol

324Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Jul 29, 2009 7:49 pm

MzMoThug

MzMoThug

I Wonder What Marcus Woulda Said If Claire Had Told Him She Went 2 The Strip Club From The Get Go

325Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 13 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Thu Jul 30, 2009 9:08 am

heatRAE!

heatRAE!

ddddaaamnnnnnnnnnnnn


whyyy she gone go off and lie booyyyy she dumb n she almost got caught wit that baby shower list


damn n i thought she was slick pig


uppszzz

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