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Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10
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427 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Mon Aug 03, 2009 10:27 pm
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can't wait for thee add!!!!
432 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Tue Aug 04, 2009 8:29 pm
golden07
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Ok...gimme a minute, I have to retye it on another computer cuz I'm not home 
433 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:01 pm
yesimHER*
finnally the board wasnt let me type on here for the longest. i think i was having a wifi hotspot issue though now that im back home my laptop has to to get back adapted lol.
nae where is my add chick!
nae where is my add chick!
434 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:09 pm
MzMoThug
Aw U Done Broke My Heart 2 Days In A Row Without Addin 
435 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:41 pm
golden07
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im sorry please don't hate me
im working on it but i don't have my computer with me at the moment
im working on it but i don't have my computer with me at the moment
436 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Aug 05, 2009 1:31 am
MzMoThug
I Don't Hate U, But I Will Love U Once U Add
437 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Aug 05, 2009 1:38 pm
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[taps my foot impatiently]
438 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Aug 05, 2009 3:38 pm
heatRAE!
watching as everyone else adds and im still sitting waiting on janae lol
upppszzz
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add soon pleaaaseeee
upppszzz
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add soon pleaaaseeee
441 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Aug 05, 2009 9:32 pm
heatRAE!
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyy uppsdzzz 
442 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Aug 05, 2009 10:35 pm
golden07
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Chapter 12 |Labor|
Its been almost a week now since the party and since Marcus and I got back together a lot of things I was worrying about escaped my mind. Reality soon came back to me as I sat on the sofa with Zay when suddenly I heard a scream next door. Immediately I hopped up leaving Zay sitting on the sofa as I made my way next door. Banging on the door, I called out to Jinn who sound as though she was in so much pain.
“Jinn…Jinn!” I screamed out.
I knew she was alone because Marcus and Corey left hours ago. Another outcry.
“Jinn, can you come to the door?” I asked with my ear hovering over the door.
“NO!” she screamed out.
What am I going to do repeated in my mind when I suddenly thought about the spare key Marcus had when he was staying over there. “Hang on, I will be right there.” I said shuffling back in the house running to the bedroom to grab the key. As soon as I found it, off I went back but noticed Zay wasn’t on the sofa anymore.
“Zay.” I screamed out. “Zay baby, where are you?” I asked making sure he was safe, but he wouldn’t answer. “Shit Zay, quit playing. Come here.” I shouted. I ran to check in his bedroom, but he wasn’t there. I didn’t have anytime. I grabbed my phone and dialed 911 to get an ambulance through here. Afterwards I rushed back out the door to unlock it when I notice Zay standing by Jinn’s door. I let out a deep sigh of relief seeing him there as I opened the door to see Jinn on her knees. She is breathing hard and in a burst of sweat. Immediately I rushed over to her side seeing her eyes filed with tears.
“Please…Please call Corey.” she pleaded as I notice her body trembled and another scream escaping her lips.
“Ok. Let me just get my phone.” I said digging in my pocket while Zay stood beside me worried.
“Is TiTi okay?” he asked pulling on the sleeve of my shirt as I brought the phone up to my ear.
“She is okay.” I reassured him as the phone went to his voicemail.
She must have known.
“Son of a bitch better answer.” she said heavily.
I immediately called Marcus phone who answered on the fifth ring.
“Yea.” he answered.
“Jinn is in labor.” I said ecstatically. “Where are you all? Jinn is screaming from the top of her lungs about Corey.” I said and suddenly heard a gunshot.
“Shit.” he said muffled. “We going to meet ya‘ll at the hospital.” he said then hung up.
That pissed me off just now because that let me know some funny business just went down. I propped her up so that she could get off her knees as she sat in the puddle of fluid released from her body.
“I‘m scared Clare…Where is Corey?” she asked.
“They are going to meet us at the hospital.” I respond to her when deep down I was mad.
The sound of the ambulance pulled up in the driveway and everything seem to have went fast as I found myself parked in front of the hospital…
Its been almost a week now since the party and since Marcus and I got back together a lot of things I was worrying about escaped my mind. Reality soon came back to me as I sat on the sofa with Zay when suddenly I heard a scream next door. Immediately I hopped up leaving Zay sitting on the sofa as I made my way next door. Banging on the door, I called out to Jinn who sound as though she was in so much pain.
“Jinn…Jinn!” I screamed out.
I knew she was alone because Marcus and Corey left hours ago. Another outcry.
“Jinn, can you come to the door?” I asked with my ear hovering over the door.
“NO!” she screamed out.
What am I going to do repeated in my mind when I suddenly thought about the spare key Marcus had when he was staying over there. “Hang on, I will be right there.” I said shuffling back in the house running to the bedroom to grab the key. As soon as I found it, off I went back but noticed Zay wasn’t on the sofa anymore.
“Zay.” I screamed out. “Zay baby, where are you?” I asked making sure he was safe, but he wouldn’t answer. “Shit Zay, quit playing. Come here.” I shouted. I ran to check in his bedroom, but he wasn’t there. I didn’t have anytime. I grabbed my phone and dialed 911 to get an ambulance through here. Afterwards I rushed back out the door to unlock it when I notice Zay standing by Jinn’s door. I let out a deep sigh of relief seeing him there as I opened the door to see Jinn on her knees. She is breathing hard and in a burst of sweat. Immediately I rushed over to her side seeing her eyes filed with tears.
“Please…Please call Corey.” she pleaded as I notice her body trembled and another scream escaping her lips.
“Ok. Let me just get my phone.” I said digging in my pocket while Zay stood beside me worried.
“Is TiTi okay?” he asked pulling on the sleeve of my shirt as I brought the phone up to my ear.
“She is okay.” I reassured him as the phone went to his voicemail.
She must have known.
“Son of a bitch better answer.” she said heavily.
I immediately called Marcus phone who answered on the fifth ring.
“Yea.” he answered.
“Jinn is in labor.” I said ecstatically. “Where are you all? Jinn is screaming from the top of her lungs about Corey.” I said and suddenly heard a gunshot.
“Shit.” he said muffled. “We going to meet ya‘ll at the hospital.” he said then hung up.
That pissed me off just now because that let me know some funny business just went down. I propped her up so that she could get off her knees as she sat in the puddle of fluid released from her body.
“I‘m scared Clare…Where is Corey?” she asked.
“They are going to meet us at the hospital.” I respond to her when deep down I was mad.
The sound of the ambulance pulled up in the driveway and everything seem to have went fast as I found myself parked in front of the hospital…
443 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Aug 05, 2009 10:47 pm
golden07
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Such a shitty add...smh
444 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Aug 05, 2009 11:27 pm
yesimHER*
awww man. that was such a teaser!!! how marcus gonna get mad at her for lying and his asss lying about "taking care of buisness"
corey ass shouldve been there with his pregnant girlfriend!!! wtf!!
corey better not be shot or i will kill him rotflma
corey ass shouldve been there with his pregnant girlfriend!!! wtf!!
corey better not be shot or i will kill him rotflma
445 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Thu Aug 06, 2009 7:13 am
pureSEDUCTION
Ummmm where's da rest of it????
Lol. Corey you should have been with Jinn
Marcus.... I don't even wanna type about you right now....hypocrite.
Lol. Corey you should have been with Jinn
Marcus.... I don't even wanna type about you right now....hypocrite.
446 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Thu Aug 06, 2009 7:31 am
MzMoThug
It Wasn't A Shitty Add, I Liked It... Except It Was Short
447 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:58 am
heatRAE!
NOOOO HOW YA JUST GONE STOP LIKE THAT
U KNO WAT I BELIEVE ITS JUST A TEASER FOR A BIG ADD THAT COMIN SOON TODAY AINT IT
.....................................
ATLEAST I HOPE IT IS
BUT ANYWAYS
MARCUS ASS BET NOT B DOING NUN THAT COULD JEPREDIZE(I SSPELT IT HOW IT SOUND LOL) THE RELATIONSHIP
AND WHERE THE FUCK COREY GONE LEAVE HIS DAMN PREGANNT GIRL THERE ALONE
U KNO WAT I BELIEVE ITS JUST A TEASER FOR A BIG ADD THAT COMIN SOON TODAY AINT IT
.....................................ATLEAST I HOPE IT IS
BUT ANYWAYS
MARCUS ASS BET NOT B DOING NUN THAT COULD JEPREDIZE(I SSPELT IT HOW IT SOUND LOL) THE RELATIONSHIP
AND WHERE THE FUCK COREY GONE LEAVE HIS DAMN PREGANNT GIRL THERE ALONE
448 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Thu Aug 06, 2009 9:37 am
golden07
Admin
working on next add. And I know it was short lol
i changed the whole thing
when i made it home.
449 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Thu Aug 06, 2009 11:24 am
heatRAE!
yayyyyy im gone wait so it can be perfect lol
450 Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Thu Aug 06, 2009 12:24 pm
MzMoThug
I Hope U Add Again 2day
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