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Pulse: They Were Taught To Hustle, Not To Care. NEW ADD 8/20/14!!

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her love is infinite ;)

her love is infinite ;)

that was sooo qood !
cant wait for nexx add Smile

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J'Adore

J'Adore

i wanna try and add today
i think this one is gonna be maybe my fav chapter, kinda lol

upps!

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golden07

golden07
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add it

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J'Adore

J'Adore

=)

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dezzy.baby1

dezzy.baby1

add it add it add it add it!!
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J'Adore

J'Adore

Pulse: They Were Taught To Hustle, Not To Care. NEW ADD 8/20/14!! - Page 11 Pulse07
Chapter Twenty Three; Aria
Saturday, November 21, 2007
Torrence "Rock" Bryant


"Are you serious right now?" Khiry asked folding her arms.

"Bae, pack ya' shit and quit asking questions. You going whether you want to or not"

"Oh so you just tell me where I go?"

"Will you stop being so fuckin complicating! Just pack yo shit and huryy up!" I had lost my temper, and mind. I took a deep breath and grabbed Khiry's arm as she stormed passed him. "Im sorry. Aight? I just can't have you some where, laid out cause some stupid shit I did. I gotta get you outta here before it's too late, and I aint taking no for an answer, so help me pack ya' stuff. I aint tryna argue wit' you right now" I said as I kissed her lips. Khiry took a deep breath and leaned her head against my chest. "So where you shipping me too?" she asked. "Cancuun I think, y'all aint staying there though, a plane taking y'all to Coasta Rica." She looked up at me. "Promise me when this is all over, that you're done with this. I'm not trying to go through this anymore. Promise me, T" she demanded with begging eyes. I looked away, "Shit me neither. I got you though" Khiry smiled halfheartedly as she turned to continue to pack her clothes. "Y'all leave in the morning, we're going by Rome's place for Joy's birthday tonight." I ordered for Khiry's bags to be placed in the trunk of the car the girls would be driven to the airport in. I couldn't risk any chances of someone seeing me place her luggages in my trunk, or the decoy car. We walked out of the building hand in hand with Khiry wrapped up in the Prada over coat I had bought her; it was cold as fuck tonight. We headed for my place.

Khiry giggled as I kissed her neck while laughing as well. We were two doors down from mines, when the sound of glass shattering cut through the air. "Baby is that your place?" Khiry questioned as we came to a hault. "Go back to the elevator" Rock demanded.

Khiry did as she was told. Rock's door was left slightly open as he slowly eased to the door. Sliding against the wall, Rock grabbed the .9 from his waist and took the safety off. These nigga's definately had a fuckin death wish. Wish granted bitch. Peaking through the crack, there stood a little girl crying and holding her stomach. "Hurry I'm hungry" she cried. She stood in the kitchen still whinning. All the lights were off except a lamp. A dark shadow crossed her, grabbing her hand pulling her to the door. Rock kicked the door open. There stood Adrian, eye to eye with his .9. Rock looked down to see A holding three stacks in one hand, and the little girl's hand in the other. "The fuck you doing?" Rock questioned, "Nigga you robbin me?" the devil spat. "T-t-t Man-" Adrian's shakey voice spoke.

"Please dont hurt him!"
she cried, "he's my big brother." Rock looked at the girl, then Adrian. Was she the 'lil sister' A had spoken about? Torrence wasn't going to kill his brother over money, espeascially not infront of her; Rock was ready to light his ass up for the audasity he had to try and rob him.

"Put my shit down" I spoke as he flipped the lights on. Applying the safety on the gun, I placed the gun back to my waist; I had to let Rock, my alter ego, go. "Khiry" my baritone voice called out, loud enough for her to hear me down the hall. I never took my eye's off of Adrian. "Everything ok?" Khiry asked as she grabbed a hold of my hand. "Yeah, just a misunderstanding. Go wait for me" I said. Khiry slightly smiled as she walked passed Adrian, she was too scared to even speak, I think. I awaited for the sound of my bedroom door to shut. "What the fuck was you thinking?" I roared, ignoring the tender ears in the room. Adrian whipped his face, becoming nervous. "She needed food, I aint know where else to go" Adrian twitched as he rubbed behind his ear; he was still on that shit. "Adrian dont fuck with me -"

"Im not man, im not. I was gone pay it back, you know im good for it" Adrian said with pleding eyes, "me and Aria gotta go" he said as he pulled her forward. She pushed back, "I dont wanna go back there, I wanna stay here!" she cried. I had too much on my plate to take in some lil girl right now, I aint need no more surpise kids either. I peeled off a $100 off of one of the stacks. "Mcdonalds, Beverly Motel. You better be there, and she better be fed. Don't make me look for you" I said as I coldly looked him in the eyes. Adrian nodded as he bald up the bill in his hand and stuffed it in his pocket. He quickly pulled the young girl behind him, making their exit.

Just when shit was starting to work out, I had another problem on my brain. I walked to my bedroom to see that Khiry had placed Joy's gift in a bag and decorated it with colorfull papers. "Babe what happened in there?" she asked. "Nothing, it's all good" I said as I kissed her check. "Are y'all related? Because I swear that little girl looks just like you. Was that Adrian?" she asked. I had talked about Adrian, right after I told Khi about Shauney being pregnant. I ignored her questions as I left for the bathroom. I felt so dry, like a huge weight had just showered over me. The last thing I needed was more stress. I said a prayer for the first time in a while. Splashing water on my face, I hoped that would help some what. I grabbed my keys and Khiry and I were off to Rome's place.

***

Smiling as I leaned against the wall, watching Joy dance in the crowd of friends, I sipped on a soft drink, seeing that I was slowly winging away from liquor. Torrence was there, but my mind was gone. My mind was stuck on what I had just done. I had just bought my brother another high. I knew inside Adrian wasn't going to buy Aria food, or a room for her to lay her head in. But at that moment, money got Adrian out of the way and that was what I needed. I leaned my head against the wall as I shut my eyes. Biting down on my lip, I tried my best not to think about what could be happening to Aria at that moment. Deep down I knew Aria was my sister. She was the spitting image of her mother, so much till it almost made me sick to my stomach. I couldn't leave that innocent girl to watch her brother shoot up drugs. Anything could happen, many things could have already happened. I opened my eyes and the loud music screamed in my ears; I was back in reality. Everybody was still dancing, it was crazy because I looked over to see Joy on the couch knocked out. I watched as Khiry laughed with Kaylee and Des. In that same moment, she looked over at me; a concerned looked washed over her. She said something to Kaylee then walked over. "Baby, you alright?" she asked. I nodded, "I left something at the house, I'll be back" I gave her my drink and headed for the door. "Well, let me come with you" she insisted. "No" I said sharply, "no." I closed the door an rushed out of the building, the only way I would be able to shake this sick feeling in the pitt of my stomach was to make sure Aria was safe.

I turned into the Beverly Motel. "Did a guy come by here with a lil girl, bout this tall?" I asked, with my hand near my waist. The Middle Eastern man nodded his head. "Two men and little girl, room 23 in the back" he replied with his strong accient. I nodded as I exited the check in office. Walking around the back, I found Adrian leaning against the wall, smoking. "Where is she?" I asked impaciently.

"Where the fuck is she?" Rock growled as he pinned Adrian against the wall, balding his shirt up in his fist. "No!" Aria screamed. Torrence slung Adrian onto the gravel.

"Aria!" I said as I pushed the door open. There was Aria, crying as she held herself in her arms at the head of the bed. A man stood at the foot of it. His shirt was off, his slacks and belt still intact. His body was tattooed, I couldn't make it out though, nor did I wish to. I didn't care who he was, or what he hadn't done, I knew what it looked like. Rock reappeared & pulled out his .9, his fingers were like magic as he flipped the saftey off, while pulling the trigger. Two bullets forced through the male figure in his back. You ever heard a grown man cry? Try hearing one scream. Aria's face flooded with tears. I scooped her up in my arms as I aimed the gun at the door; Adrian couldn't be trusted. Stepping out, I realized Adrian had fled the scene, and with sound of sirens nearing, I knew the best thing for the two of us was to do the same.




Author's Note:: When Torrence becomes "Rock" the writting changes to third person, i hope that didn't confuse anyone.

If one day the link doesn't work, Aria is Erica "Brit Brat" Gluck from The Game. I decided since they took her off [which was really stupid bc i dnt like the new one] I would add her =).


what are y'all's thoughts of Adrian?
Could Aria be his sister?
Or maybe just some lil girl?
What should Torrence do?


I want mega-reviews!!!!!!!!!
hope yu all enjoy!

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J'Adore

J'Adore

boom! New pagee! =D

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dezzy.baby1

dezzy.baby1

I so freaking loved this chapter!!
It has to be one of the best chapters yet!!
How could Adrian let that happen to his own blood!! no heart at all!!
Rock should have blast his ass!!
I so hope T and Aria get away fast enough!!
I so loved this one!!!
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golden07

golden07
Admin

You were so right about this add...

Okay now the review...

Adrian is heartless. Crack kills all, family friends your life...
it just kills everything. And Aria, so innocent. I believe that
is his sister, and even if it wasn't my conscience would be
eating me alive knowing my good for nothing brother has a
one track mind. Why do I have a feeling Adrian has a lot
more to do that would mess up someone's life? Anywho...
love the add...cannot wait for more...

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dezzy.baby1

dezzy.baby1

so ummm yeah...
I cant speak for everyone else...but im ready for a new add!!!
bounce bounce bounce

__eyeCandy

__eyeCandy

yes, i think thats his sister!
ADD SOON! this add was GREEAT!

EBz Perradize

EBz Perradize

::UGH:: Adrian has disgusted me to the nth degree! I freaking hate people who use drugs but feel bad for them at the same time. It's like they aren't themselves. People on drugs kind of remind me of Spider-man 3 and that black ish that made him all evil one minutes and regular the next! SMH

But, it is a possibility that Aria is his sister! I can't say what to do because what if it isn't and he puts her on that cruise in the morning and someone recognizes her? I dnt need Rock goin down for kidnapping! And, if it is his sister, what if Adrian reports her missing?

I dnt want to say "Shoot to kill" next time Rock sees Adrian but this guy could pose as a threat, Fam or not. He could lead these unknown niggas right to Rock and 'nem!!

ANYWHO, ADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!

dezzy.baby1

dezzy.baby1

i agree 100%

SurreallPrincess100

SurreallPrincess100

omg is al i can say plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz add more!

golden07

golden07
Admin

I WANT MORE OF THIS STORY TOO...

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dezzy.baby1

dezzy.baby1

add add add
add add
add
please!!!!
Very Happy

dezzy.baby1

dezzy.baby1

waiting for next add!!
bounce

J'Adore

J'Adore

Pulse: They Were Taught To Hustle, Not To Care. NEW ADD 8/20/14!! - Page 11 Pulsexs
Chapter Twenty-Three; Every Nigga That Glitters
Saturday, November 21, 2007
Janae


-----------------------------------
Meet me outside his spot in 5
--I.D. Theift

10:49PM Sat, Nov 21
From : Tyson
-----------------------------------



I cleared my phone screen, aggravated. I plastered a smile on my face as Rome entered the room.



"You aight?" he asked.



"Mhhm" I said nodding my head, "I'm fine"



"Come on, you missing the party. Who you textin?" he asked as he pulled my hand, pulling me off of the bed. I tossed my phone on the bed.



"Nobody," I smiled. Soon Rome's lips were sucking on mine. He couldn't keep his hands off of me lately, knowing his future plans to send me to another country and all. "Baby let me get some fresh air; that Remy Martin got me in a daze. I'ma hit the lobby," I said kissing his lips.



"Need me to come down with you?" he asked.



"You do realize who you talkin to, right? I can handle myself, Rome," I said looking at him. I guess he forgot who exactly he was dealing with.



"Don't have me looking for you, shit already hot," Rome said walking out before me. I exhaled deeply, I could tell he was kind of upset. I don't know how long I can keep this game up. I made my way to the lobby, only to see Tyson's car parked in front of the sliding glass doors. He leaned on his ride, he was dressed in some baggy dark blue jeans and an all black tee. I wrapped my arms around myself as the cool breeze hit my arms. I stood in front of Tyson, neither of us exchanged words. I didn't know what to say, I hadn't planned on seeing Tyson, not for a while. I had tried my best to part myself from him since that day at the salon, but I felt like I owed him something. He helped me with my dad and stuff, he was there the whole time for me, right along with Tiffany. I couldn't keep her and lose him. "You thought about what I said?" he asked. "Yeah, I have, and I don't believe you. Rome has no other woman, he wouldn't do that." Tyson smacked his lips. "And why the hell not? I know you see these hoes chasin' after these niggas. You aint been down here that long, nigga aint too much in love. I know you aint," he said whipping the bridge of his nose. "And what if I am? Who the hell are you to tell me what my feelings are? Rome tells me everything. Look, Tyson, I don't owe you anything, I paid you for what you did for me, okay?" I said stepping to him closer, making sure he heard me clearly.

"Aight ma', now let me spit some at you," he said in his heavy New York accent, "you real child-minded right now, that nigga got you blind as a bat. We been down since ya moms left here, and I know you Jae; you aint feelin this nigga for real, you just need a fuckin jump-off. I don' been around the block before and this lil nigga just gettin started, he think he big shit cause he got connect with the Colombians but that shit aint gon' last. I'm on my superman shit right now, and that muh'fucka up there, he might be on some grown man shit, but not for long. He gone bring you down wit'em. Nigga bout to fall soon. And when he do, you can't say a nigga aint warn you. You too bad to be somebody's 'Bitch' in prison," Tyson said as he touched my lips before easing up from his car, he walked to the driver side, "So you ridin or what? Last chance Jae, it's my time. You gon' sit here and get played like the rest of these hoes, or you wanna get back on the grind? I'ma have my name painted on these streets," I shook my head and turned around, I couldn't be more through with Tyson's ass. "Janae!" Tyson yelled out, I turned around with attitude. "I guess he told you about him and Des," he said as he clsed his door. I looked at him puzzled, "Des?" I repeated. "Every nigga that glitters aint gold," he said before pulling off. Before I could even calculate my thoughts, I noticed Torrence rushing through, he had a mug on his face as he pulled a little girl by her arm behind him.




small, i know, but it gets better after this. let me get like...at least 4 reviews on what yll think is gonna happen next & the next add will be upp Very Happy. Shiit gets CRAZY! And a few people from previous chapters appear, and we get to see what their private lives are like. bumperz!!!!

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dezzy.baby1

dezzy.baby1

O_O im upset cause it was a very short add!!
but besides that it was good!!
I wonder whats gone happen next!!
add soon!!

golden07

golden07
Admin

Okay...My thoughts and reflection on this...

I hope Rome won't play me but I have a feeling his
feelings for Des will come to light and I will just
be another memory... Sad The thing is what will Floyd
do on the matter cuz he really feeling Des. I can tell.
Tyson seem more selfish trying to use me to get his name
in the streets and the thing is if I would've went with him,
things would only be worst instead of better...So my dear ADD!!!

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dezzy.baby1

dezzy.baby1

I agree totally....
And i wanna know what kinda game Nae playin...cause she was like... "Idk how long i can keep this game up"
so hmmmm....you just need to add!!!

J'Adore

J'Adore

lol yay reviews!!!! Y'all are gonna trip when yall find out the truth of it all! Its gonna all make sense after a few adds, promise Smile

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TheBee

TheBee

cant wait! ^.^

golden07

golden07
Admin

Lol at Des. I know right...Its ashame...lol

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SurreallPrincess100

SurreallPrincess100

im waiting!!! oh and plz add more to Highschool heartbreak on the other bored plzzz lol i love that story Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy


lol im sorry! i gotta get bakk to Tattooed. Im happy yu like it Smile

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