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J'Adore

J'Adore

lol im sorry! i gotta get bakk to Tattooed. Im happy yu like it Smile

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J'Adore

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think ima add tomorrow =)

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SexyT

SexyT


It has been a damn long time since I read this story!

I honestly think that Adrian is on some stupid shit...Torrence/Rock is right. Adrian cannot be trusted! He need to take care of his baby sister and he need to tell his girl about her. Stop leaving her in the dark about shit. I'm glad he blew that guy...taking advantage of his baby sister like that. But I'm so happy that him and Khiry got back together...Christian sounded so gay anyway! lol

Rome never told Nae about Des? That's not cool. I thought they told each other everything! I hope Nae don't get to mad about Des. Her and Rome need to talk it out.
Des need to leave Rome alone though. He with Janae now and she need to respect his and hers.

Floyd is plain stupid. Too much about the pussy! (Typical of most child-minded men! lol) He got the girl pregnant and he need to step up and take care of her and that baby. He need to get someone who gon treat him the way he treats women-BAD! And then he will learn his lesson!

Tyson is on something stupid...I'm sure his planning on taking ALR down. He crazy cuz I know ALR will blow his brains and all his little pawns brains the fuck out!!

This story brings out the bitch in me! lol...I LOVE IT!!
Twisted Evil
ADD MORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR MUCH MORRRRRRRRRRRR


Very Happy

dezzy.baby1

dezzy.baby1

lol!!!
i soo hope when i get home from churh there will be a new chapter!!

UPZ!!!

J'Adore

J'Adore

SexyAriza!! wrote:

It has been a damn long time since I read this story!

I honestly think that Adrian is on some stupid shit...Torrence/Rock is right. Adrian cannot be trusted! He need to take care of his baby sister and he need to tell his girl about her. Stop leaving her in the dark about shit. I'm glad he blew that guy...taking advantage of his baby sister like that. But I'm so happy that him and Khiry got back together...Christian sounded so gay anyway! lol

Rome never told Nae about Des? That's not cool. I thought they told each other everything! I hope Nae don't get to mad about Des. Her and Rome need to talk it out.
Des need to leave Rome alone though. He with Janae now and she need to respect his and hers.

Floyd is plain stupid. Too much about the pussy! (Typical of most child-minded men! lol) He got the girl pregnant and he need to step up and take care of her and that baby. He need to get someone who gon treat him the way he treats women-BAD! And then he will learn his lesson!

Tyson is on something stupid...I'm sure his planning on taking ALR down. He crazy cuz I know ALR will blow his brains and all his little pawns brains the fuck out!!

This story brings out the bitch in me! lol...I LOVE IT!!
Twisted Evil
ADD MORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR MUCH MORRRRRRRRRRRR


Very Happy



lmaoo!!!!! love itt!

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J'Adore

J'Adore

Pulse: They Were Taught To Hustle, Not To Care. NEW ADD 8/20/14!! - Page 12 Pulse07
Chapter Twenty-Four; Changing Lanes
Saturday, November 21, 2007
Torrence


"I say we do this shit tonight," I said in a low tone. I had pulled Rome out to the large sized balcony.

"We still on square one with this nigga, we'on even know where he at," Rome said, not trying to hear what I had to say, all of this was out of pocket.

"Somebody will lead us to him, this nigga gettin sloppy as fuck with his shit, trust me on this one, bruh. I got that feeling," I said. Rome looked at me hard. He turned away, gripping the railing on the balcony as he remained silent. If he did decide to role out tonight, it would be a sink or swim situation. "Look, if you aint feelin it, I'll drop the shit right now. But this nigga close, i can feel it." His eyes finally glared at me.

"What you got planned?" he finally spoke. I smiled.

"We gotta move quick, cuz these muthafuckas quicker. So quick that this muthafucka was damn near at our doorstep. They don' hit, Tee, Kay, Floyd's mom's place, that was all petty shit though. Those were just warnings. We gotta retaliate and soon," Rome began to nod his head. The balcony door slid open, and Aria appeared.

"I'm hungry," her small voice said.

"Aight, go sit down," I replied. I watched her as she slid the sliding door closed and resorted to the couch were Joy lie sleeping.

"Who was that?" Rome asked.

"Long ass story. Adrien flippin. But fuck that, we gotta deal with right now. I saw we track that Carson nigga down, tonight. He gettin too comfortable. He sloppy with it too." Rome nodded his head and slapped hands with me. "Aye, check ole girl, for real," I said as I released from our hood mannored hand shake.

"Lets do this, get the boys out here," Rome said. I was glad to know that shit was bout to pop off. I had anger built in from Adrians acts, and two bullets had not satisfied me. I grabbed Aria's hand and led her through the house, insearch of Khiry. I found her in Rome's bedroom, sittin on the bed with Jae and Tiffany. I could tell they had been in a deep conversation, Janae didn't even want to look at me. "What's up baby?" Khiry asked as she walked out into the hallway. "I need you to make her a plate, shit went down with Adrien, she cant stay with him no more. Keep an eye on her for me," I said releasing Aria's hand. "Aria, this is Khiry, she gone watch after you till i get back, aight?" I said as I knealed down to her. Aria didn't speak, but the huge hug she gave me said a million words. "Torrence, where are you going?" Khiry asked. Aria released my neck and lauched on to Khiry's hand. I kissed my woman and headed back to the living room, leaving her question unanswered. I gathered up the guys from the living room and we all were soon standing on the balcony.

"Ty, I need you and Ben to take Tee & everybody to X, we cant trust the drop off shit, it's too hot. X is monitored at all times, it's the safest place for now. Hit me when y'all get there," Rome said as he dapped Ben and Ty; the two had the biggest rides, seeing that they both were pushing Escalades. Within moments, all of the women were walking out of Rome's place. Khiry held Aria's hand, and Kaylee held a sleeping Joy as they walked out. Rome was smart enough to know that Janae & Tiffany had too much pride to run, he knew they were either riding together, or they weren't riding at all. Before he continued to speak of the plan, he made sure both Escalades exited the parking lot safely. "Mikhail and Floyd, y'all following Janae & Tiffany. Me and Torrence rollin through Saints place to pick up that heat. I gotta feeling they gon lead us right to where we need to be." The men left the balcony, but Rome pulled Mikhail to the side, for he had a secret mission for him...
........

Chapter Twenty-Five; Ride or Die


Janae rode shot gun in Tiffany's creme Lexus LF-A. Tiffany did 90 on the highway, switching from lane to lane. "I still can't believe that nigga though! Fuck!" Tiffany yelled. She had never felt so played before. "On that niggas mother I'ma get his ass," she said slowing down, taking the exit ramp that led to Tyson's place. "Why we comin here anyway?" Janae asked. "We got business to handle. Fuck Rome. We gotta worry about Tyson. I know you aint gon sit here and let this nigga mooch off your daddy's thrown. He's tryna make a come up off your daddy Nae! You know that's a bitch move! You know what, whether you want to or not, I'm bout to run up in this muthafucka," Tiffany said before turning off her lights. She rolled down the side street slowly, making a left, she entered the apartment complex; she didn't need any body "looking-out" to notice her. She parked two buildings down from Tyson's. "But you know, Tyson does know the run a round. We been down since the playground. Why the fuck not make some extra money off his ass, then set that muthafucka straight? Feel me? He already diggin you, you got his ass wrapped around your finger. It's all in the game baby girl. You down?" Tiffany asked as an all black car rode past then, pulling up in front of Tyson's building. A door shut, but no one was seen.

"Who the fuck was that & where the fuck did they go?" Tiffany asked under her breath. "Tiff, I aint foolin with it. That nigga up there's foul. I aint fuckin with it, I suggest you dont either, but hey, who am I to stand in the way of a girl and her money?" Janae asked half saracasticly. "You talkin crazy. Look, I'm bout to see what's up, you can stay down here if you want to." Tiffany got out of the car, leaving Janae just as she said she would. She eyed the black car suspiciously as she passed it, she pulled out her phone, and soon put it back in her pocket. She knocked on Tyson's door and waited impaciently. The door unlocked and just as quick as it open, Tiffany was starring down the barrel of Tyson's gun. "You got 3 seconds to get that outta my face," she said staring him down. "My bad, I aint trustin niggas these days, what you here for?" he asked as he looked out into the breeze way, making sure no one had followed her up. He locked the door and turned towards her. "Who else in here?" Tiffany asked. "Nobody, I'm rollin up out this bitch tomorrow, I got some business to handle first though," he said placing his gun on the side table. "You talkin money business?" Tiffany asked. "Aint that what im bout? Why?" Tyson questioned. "I'm tryna be down, Janae told me you had some big plans, she too fuckin stupid to role," Tiffany said as she sat down on Tyson's couch. "Oh word?" Tyson asked as he looked at her thighs.

Tiffany patted the seat next to her. "I can't stay down here, Tys, I mean, I put on this act, but I been feeling you for a while now, " Tiffany admitted, "I need a real man, a go getta'," Tiffany said as she let her fingertip trace Tyson's lips, "I always loved your lips," she whispered. "Let's leave tonight, just you and me. I know you gonna take over NY, and with a bad bitch like me on your side, you cant lose baby," she said before kissing him. Tyson knew he had a bad bitch now. He knew that with both his businesses, dealing and a future business of pimping, he was about to reign over NY. By the way Tiffany was acting, he knew she wouldn't be able to resist him by the time he ripped her from her family & friends. She was already willing to leave her bestfriend, her sister almost just take on the Big Apple by storm with him. Tyson knew he would get top dollar for Tiffany's ass. He could smell the money rolling in already. He kissed Tiffany hard and rough. "I know you gotta plan," Tiffany said as he moved to her neck. "Fuck yea I gotta plan. When I finish fuckin you, I'ma do that shit," he said as he bit her neck. "I wanna role too, baby," Tiffany moaned, "tell me what's up," she said. "Just know that this muthafuka got a meal ticket, and we gon be eatin in the morning," Tyson said before he gripped her pants. "Wait!" Tiffany said, pushing him off, "I though we were leaving tonight, if we can get his shit tonight, why wait for tomorrow? Com'on baby, the quicker the better," Tiffany spoke as she gave him small kisses, "And besides, business first," she smirked. Tyson leaned up. "Alright tell me more, where's the bathroom?" she asked. Tyson directed her to the bathroom. Tiffany turned the water on, it helped her use it faster. "We been watchin this nigga for a while now, mutha'fucka got that good shit. I got my niggas at the spot, we all runnin up in that bitch. Killin bitches and fuckin hoes. That nigga got two spots, a club and a music studio," Tyson said as he stood outside of the door, "You aight in there?" he asked. "I'm fine," Tiffany smiled as she opened the door, "You hot?" she asked, asking him if he had any guns, "we gon need some hella heat, and you know I dont fuck with the lil shit," Tiffany said licking her lips. Tyson had soon packed up every kilo he had in one duffle bag, and his guns in the other. "You ready baby?" Tiffany asked, she held both bags. Tyson kissed her before he opened the door.

"Muthafucka get the fuck down!" a masked man screamed as he pointed an AK-47 at Tyson. Another masked male came in behind him with the same deadly weapon. "Bitch get the fuck out here!" He spat. Tiffany screamed loudly as she made her exit. "Shut the fuck up! Get the fuck down there," he said poking her harshly in the shoulder with his gun. Tiffany knew they weren't bullshitting. She carefully eased down the steps, her eyes searching for Janae. But neither Janae nor Tiffany's car was there. An all black truck pulled up just as Tiffany was pushed into the lot. "Get the fuck in!" Tiffany climbed in and slid to the side. The door shut and the truck pulled off full speed. It stopped around the corner and the light came on. Tiffany set her eyes on who had captured her. "Bitch!"



soo.....i wonder where des is? she wasnt mentioned at the partyy...hmmmmmm.

i wants reviews!!!! Enjoy! Apologies for typos!

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dezzy.baby1

dezzy.baby1

Really!! i wonder where im at!! lol I hope i aint doing nothing i dont have no damn business doing....but if its some trill shit then we good lol!!
Man tiffany fuckin down bad for that shit...that aint even trill!!
How u just up and do that to your bestfriend!!
Was that Floyd and Mikhail who bust in on Tyson and Tiff??
I wonder where Janea dipped of too??
And who got Tiff...omg idk!!!


Man please add another part!! i just gotta know these answers!!

golden07

golden07
Admin

Where to start...

First off...Fiya add...Loving it.
What in the world was Tiff
doing man and where did I dip to?
Idk who the freak that was in
the van...Dang man...Don't leave
us hanging like that...Please hurry
and add...

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BarbiieBiitch

BarbiieBiitch

O.M.Gosh this Add Got Me hype as hell lol
So I think them niggas in mask is Rome. Niggas

And the person who kidnapped tiff is Nae
or dez idk this add got me lost

Add more add more

J'Adore

J'Adore

upperzsx! where yll at???

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SexyT

SexyT

Girl you know we waiting on you!!!

Where's that add???
Who's the bitch? I think Des has something to do with all this shit...She's not the same Des who Ace knew...Na-uh...something foul about her.

I hope I'm right!! lol

SexyT

SexyT

Aww shucks....
Ya girl got you a fresh new page for that new add!!!

Hurry now...don't keep her waiting!!!

cheers

her love is infinite ;)

her love is infinite ;)

Omg i miss this story soooooo much . that add was amazing . I wonder where nae went n who's car was i in ???

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J'Adore

J'Adore

thank you!
Adding tomorrow night ladies!!!

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J'Adore

J'Adore


Chapter Twenty-Seven; Show Off
Late Saturday Night
-November 21, 2007-


"Bitch!" Tiffany laughed as she looked at Janae. Benjamin sat behind the wheel dressed in all black. "Look, Floyd's going back in the house to see what else Tyson's hiding in the apartment. Once Mikhail get's Tyson in the black car he and Floyd came in, Tyson's gon lead them to his spot. Here, put this on," Janae said. Tiffany tossed the two duffle bags in the back seat. "Rome is in your car, Torrence is behind him, them and Ben are gonna trail Mikahil and Floyd to some spot where the rest of Tyson's people are." Janae said. Tiffany pulled out her phone and ended the call she had shared my Mikhail, which had been on speaker the entire time; she played her role well. Only momets before was Janae notified of what was really happening. It didn't take long for her to snap back into Janae from upstate. Ben backed up as he noticed Floyd take the front seat of the all black box Chevy, and Mikhail holding Tyson at gun point, ready to shoot if the nigga showed disrespect, as he forced him in the back seat. Ben pulled off, whipping his Escalade as if it were a BMW.

Though Janae was down for the ride, she knew Tyson was right. She had been blind. She was blind on not seeing Tyson for what he really was. He was just another Blaze. She should have know. Tyson was working for someone bigger than him though. Tyson would lead the crew directly to Carson and his spot. Floyd pulled up to a new club by the name of Cherry Licked . Ben pulled up to the side of the building. "Torrence gon let y'all in, just wait here," he said as he pulled his ak pistol from the side of his seat. Ben got out and disappeared in the dark alley next to the club. "What's up with this outfit?" Tiffany asked as she undressed in the backseat. "We gotta play the role," Janae said as she watched a man dressed in a long money green fur walk out of the club with two women on either side. "Look at this tacky shit here," Janae said as she shook her head. She looked through her phone as she always did, noticing something different, "Shit," she said loudly. "Aye y'alls hoes come on," They both looked at a smirking Torrence dressed in his security fit as he stood in the side door. Immediately the women exited the car. "Yo happy face ass real funny," Janae said as she pushed him in his forehead. Torrence closed the door behind them. "This how it's going down, all his niggas in a show room upstairs. They expecting strippers, so y'all aint got that much time. I'm gettin the money & coke, Ty & some other soldiers gonna have the downstairs on lock," Torrence continued as he placed magnets disguised as diamonds on their ears. "Whats this?" Tiffany asked. "Microphones. It's too more girls up there, it's four niggas in all, y'all gotta get all heat off of'em. Ben, Rome and Floyd comin' in to finish the job," he said finishing. "Um, hello? These niggas are about to leave," a girl said. "That's Kennedy, she gone show y'all up there," Torrence said as he exited, using the same door they had used to enter. [Remember Kennedy? Kennedy's the girl Torrence met at the corner store and later was found at the club with T by Khiry, the whole reason they broke up? Member her? Her character's Amerie]

Torrence walked around to the front of the club and stood next to the door along with another male. "They in there?" Ty asked. "Yea, lets shut it down," Torrence said under his breath as Ty let the last few girls in. "Alright that's it, the club has filled it's capacity." Ty announced. "Aw man!" "What the fuck?" "I told you this was a bullshit ass club!" all comments were thrown into the night air as the line of clubers caught fits. A group of girls walked up, they were dressed to impress. "Excuse me, but, it's my twenty-first birthday and me and my girls just wanna have fun. We'd do anything to get in," she said in an innocent like voice. Ty & Torrence both looked at each other and smirked. "Get the fuck up outta here!" they both said in unision. Their smiles fell off and their eyes rolled, "Fuck y'all basic ass niggas!" the "birthday girl" said as she snapped her finger. "Bitch get cho' ragedy ass up outta here with that shit! Ole musty mouth ass, stank pussy ass-" Torrence continued to embarrass her as she and her friends walked away. "You foul, man" Ty said as he laughed. "I know y'all see this muthafuck'n sign! If you aint in before 11:30 don't hang around the fuckin club!" Torrence spat at the few people that still stood in line. The line decreased and soon everyone had gone their separate way, whether it be down the strip towards the downtown area where the pussy business was like Wall St. or up the strip toward's Fancy's, a bar not too far from there. "All lots are clear," Ty said as he spoke into the microphone attached to his shirt. "Aight, blend in," Rome said. Torrence and Ty entered the club. It was nothing like the Harlem Duke or Hamilton Square, this shit was tacky as fuck. "These bitches must be bad," Ty said as they looked around, "They gotta be doin something." Torrence replied. He noticed a few of Saints soldiers being entertained by the many half-naked women that paraded around the club. Torrence and Ty headed towards the mens bathroom. A long, grey, rusted condom machine was attached to the wall. Torrence opened it and retrieved the two WalterNight pistols, black masks & gloves. "You strapped?" Torrence asked, referring to a bullet proof vest. "Always nigga," Ty said as he grabbed a gun. "Aight we in here," Ty spoke into the microphone. "One" Rome replied. Torrence and Ty knew what that meant. They stood still, not making a move. As they stood in the bathroom, a solider was starting a fight with another, it was all apart of the plan. The gun shots rang out and that was their que.

The two rushed out and demanded everybody down. "I want every fuckin cell phone in this fuckn hat!" A soldier yelled as Rock [Torrence] & Ty demanded that all hands be placed on heads. Other soldiers checked pockets for money and phones, anything that was found was being kept. "A bitch! Shut the fuck up!" A soldier yelled. His demand went through scared, deaf ears. He pulled the trigger and her cries stopped instantly. Rock and Ty both looked at him, nobody was suppose to get hurt. Not down here at least, he had gone too far. "The fuck, man?" Rock roared as he rushed over to the scene. "What the fuck are you going?!" "Nigga quit bitchin! The bitch wouldn't shut up so I did it for her! Let me see if anybody else wanna be next!" he spat. Torrence looked down at the girl and noticed who it was, Macy. [Macy is from like the 1st few chapters, Rome's Footlocker freak. Member her?] "Look nigga, I got this. That shit was personal. Quit actin and do yo' fuckin job," he said as he marched on, stepping over laying bodies.. Saint had lost his fuckin mind with the new niggas. If Torrence had not know the rules & regulations, Rock would have layed the lil nigga out without hesitation. But he had to remain in conduct. If their enimies saw that they had beef between their own turf, it wouldn't look good at all. Torrence, for the first time, kept his mouth to himself. The floor was quiet except for the few girls who cried on the floor, near Macy's dead body as their clothes abosorbed their firend's blood; the only other sounds that were made were the sounds from the dropping phones into the hat. "On everything I want that nigga," Torrence said as he & Ty stood, overseeing. "He's some new cat Saint put on," Ty replied through clentched teeth. "Fuck that. Nigga got too much mouth. I swear if this wasn't business," Torrence said as he gripped his gun tighter, his eyes watching the young nigga that stood out from his mouth. He was a show off; the type of nigga to get caught in a line-up. The less you said, the less witnesses had to go by. This nigga was givin profile. And if put under pressure, the nigga would snitch.


Added as I promised! Enjoy!
-Apologies for typos!




Last edited by -∂εfιηε sεx- "тяεy" on Sun May 22, 2011 7:53 pm; edited 4 times in total

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her love is infinite ;)

her love is infinite ;)

That add was getting good ! Why did u cut it so short ?? Add soon !

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golden07

golden07
Admin

Woo hoo finally back and time to get on a ball...Got something to read tonight...Yay...hey jas how is life?

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J'Adore

J'Adore

pretty gudd, celebrating the bday todayy =)

and yu?

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golden07

golden07
Admin

Fareal...Your old...lol...I'mma be older on the 16th of May...Don't you just love this month...lol

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dezzy.baby1

dezzy.baby1

December is the best month if you ask me!! lol =) but happy belated and early birthday to you guys!!!

Now with my review
THE ADD WAS KINDA SHORT THERE LOL
but i thought it was me who kidnapped Tiff lol but they did that
Was it all planned out for them them so set him up like that!!
If so that shit was trill...i done thought Tiff had turned her back on us!! lol
but yeah still waiting on the next add and to find out what the hell im up to!!

J'Adore

J'Adore

all I have to say is....y'all are gonna be so surprised at how this turns out Laughing

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dezzy.baby1

dezzy.baby1

0_0 hehehe cant wait!

SexyT

SexyT

Loved that add...
It was so intense...
You had me there when it was Nae who was in the van!!
I had no idea that it was all a plan...

Really cool spin you did there!!

MORE MORE MORE

J'Adore

J'Adore


Chapter Twenty-Eight; Show's Over
Late Saturday Night
-November 21, 2007-


Janae looked hesitant as she walked upon the stage in the demly lit room. The spotlights layed on the stage and the two stripper poles. A staircase existed in the middle of the stage, setting the two poles apart. She remembered Kennedy's advice: It's just like dancing in the mirror. Janae had never stripped a day in her life and never thought in a million years she would have to. She watched as Kennedy and Leah twirled around the poles. One of the four men's eyes had not left her since she had stepped from behind the curtain. It was clear that he was intrested & eager. Janae made her way towards him, switching her hips as she did so. Her leather boyshorts, which zipped from each side, hugged her ass tightly, and the thin leather top she wore set her chest on fire. Kennedy had splashed Nae & Tiffany in glitters, so Janae's body shimmered as she slowly stepped down the four steps. Tiffany had already occupied her guy. No one held an ass of her status, and her attire made her even more appealing for her, "occupation". Janae wondered how Tiffany could seem so involved. Before she knew it, she had made it to him. He grabbed her hand, removing her attention from Tiffany to him. "You into that?" he asked with a smirk on his face. As much as she wanted to tell him off, she knew she had a job to do. She looked over at Tiffany who gave her a wink. Janae nodded her head and inhaled deeply. "That's what im talkin bout," he said as Janae swung her right thigh over his lap.

***

"You got this shit?" Torrence asked. "Yeah, go get that," Ty said, letting Torrence know he could finish his mission. Torrence dissappeared into the dark hallway. He closed the door from the club, trapping himself and whoever else resided in the rooms behind the closed doors. His steps were quiet, he knew exactly where what he wanted was. As he made his way down the hallway, sex sounds erupted from every room he walked by. What another nigga put down wasn't his business nor his intrest. With his mask over his face and gloves on his hands, his identity could only be described as male, black male. He stood before the door that read "OFFICE". He listened for sounds, and sure enough Show had a young lady in his presence. Show was the owner of the club, and ALR had figured he had something to do with everything that had been going on. Torrence gripped his WalterNight as he kicked the door open.

"What the fuck?!" Show hissed as he watched his office door rip from it's frame. "Muthafucka!" he cursed as he looked at Rock's pistol. Rock had caught Show at the perfect time, with his pants down. There was nothing he could do. Rock's eyes glared at the young girl who had had her face burried between Show's forty-something-year-old legs. Torrence became diguested with Rachel. [Rachel is from earlier chapters, "The Courts" I think it is? Natasha's lil sis? Her Character is KeKe Palmer] "What the fuck you want?!" Show screamed in anger.

"Calm the fuck down. If you wanna walk up out this bitch you gone open up this muthafuckin safe," Rock spat back as he pointed his gun at the four foot safe that sat in the corner of the room. Show was defeated, and Rock dared for him to reach for a gun. He was getting whatever was in the safe; with or without Show's help.

"I'ma pull my shit up, I aint strapped," Show said calmly as his hands lowered to his waist.

"Hands on the fuckin desk!" Rock roared as he aimed his pistol closer to Show's head. "Get up," he said to Rachel, "Tell her the combination," Rock said as he looked at Show. Show had definately under estimated Rock. Rock used Show's bitch to do his dirty work for him, the less he touched, the less Police had to go by. Steam brewed from Show's ears as he said the combination through closed teeth.

"37-42-31," he said. There was absolutely nothing he could do. Rock had no plans on turning his back towards Show once he had what he wanted. "I want everything in that muthafucka," he said, speaking to Rachel while looking at a pissed off Show. Show couldn't stop himself from expressing his anger as he slammed his fist on his desk, "Fuck!" he groaned.

Rachel grabbed Show's duffle bag that sat on top of the safe. He had about 10 g's and two kilos. She grabbed his diamond chain and dropped it in the bag as well. Her hands shook violently, afraid of her fate once she gave the gunman what he wanted. Her sneaky hands had laced her panties with one stack and a few loose twenties & fifties. She cleared out Show's safe and zipped the duffle bag. Scarecly, she slid the bag across the floor towards the gunman. "You better kill me now muthafucka," Show spat. Now wasn't the time to test Rock. With all of the anger built up inside of him from Adrien's acts, he was a burning keg. Rock turned his face towards Rachel and told her to stand and turn around. Her young life was about to end, she was in the wrong place at the wrong time. She stood up slowly as tears ran down her cheeks. Her knees buckled beneath her as she looked at Show one last time. Trying to survive on her own had come back to bite her. She turned her body and closed her eyes so tight she thought her eye lids would rip. A wet, gooey sound hit the wall as Rachel waited to hear the gunshot go off. She waited, but there was no vail. Slowly she turned around to see Show's head leaning back with a bullet hole through his forhead. She looked for the guman, but he and the bag were gone; it was as if no one had been there. She wanted to cry at the gruesome scene, but she hated Show with ever bone in her body. He didn't deserve to die so quickly, so easily. Her shaky body walked over to the scene. She lifted her foot and pushed the rolling chair that heald Show's dead body to the side. She opened the drawers of his desk, grabbing the duffle bag he kept under his desk, she emptied every drawer. As she backed away, she noticed the bullet that had pilled through Show's brains stuck in the wall. She ripped it out and held it tight in her fist. This had set her free. Taking the exit door, she cleared the scene, looking back not once.

Torrence watched from his tinted windows as Rachel ran across the street, holding on to a duffle bag as if it were her life. He shook his head as he grabbed his walkie-talkie. "Show's Over," he spoke to everyone who had a microphone set. "Downstairs on lock," Ty replied. "Ladies?" Rome asked.


Added as I promised! Enjoy!
-Apologies for typos!

so what are y'all thinking about this whole thing?

what about Rachel??

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SexyT

SexyT


Really???
OMG...Are they going to follow Rachel or something? What did she steal? Money...probably!
Add more asap...
I want to know what Janae's gonna do if the dude tries anything stupid..lol

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