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Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Icon_minitimeThu Jun 18, 2015 10:33 am by J'Adore

» Brand |Manuel and Jas|
Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Icon_minitimeFri May 22, 2015 11:56 pm by J'Adore

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» Behind The Mask (John and Rachel)
Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Icon_minitimeWed May 20, 2015 11:34 pm by SexyT

» Love Mist *FINALLY!!!!!!! NEW ADD TODAY 19/05/15* PG 6
Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Icon_minitimeTue May 19, 2015 5:53 am by golden07

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Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10

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826Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Mon Nov 16, 2009 9:29 am

SexyT

SexyT

oh no!!!
Come on...
They gotta get back together...
Shoulda killed that bitch tho...
And Moe too!!
ADD SOOON

827Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Mon Nov 16, 2009 2:57 pm

heatRAE!

heatRAE!

ugghhh JANAE IM SO FIENING FOR AN ADD YO lol


add soon

pig

828Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Mon Nov 16, 2009 3:12 pm

shawnie poo



OMG M FUKIN GOD!!!
DIX IZ FUKIN RIDICULOUS!!!
I THINK MARUCS N CLARE NEED 2
GET BACK 2GETHA JUST 2 KILL
MOE N CLAREZ TWIN... OTHER DEN
DATT HE A BACKSTAPPIN BITCH
{NO OFFENSE CUZ I LUV ME SUM
MARCUS LOL} BT 4REAL DEY NEED
2 STRAIGHT UP GET RID OF ALL DA
BULLSHIT PPL CAUSIN DEM PROBLEMZ
N MOVE DA FUK ON CUZ DEY WUD 2
DO SOOOO GUD 2GETHA..


GURL ADD REALLL SOON CUZ DIX
WAR GOTTA CONTINUE...
BUMPZ 2 DA MOTHAFUKIN FULLEST!!! Laughing

829Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Mon Nov 16, 2009 8:03 pm

Pleasure's wifey*peaches*



So marcus needs to find her fast
He needs to get her back and then make a deal or sumthing with her twin
Add soon tho

Loving it

830Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Nov 18, 2009 11:28 am

Mizz_Choclate-Kiss

Mizz_Choclate-Kiss

Damn!!!!!!! Clare had a damn twin and she nore her father knew!!!! This shyt is so fuked up that Marcus knew she had a twin......he should have jus told her and her father 4rm the start. then when she finish her uncle she couldve finished or compromise wit her twin. Now she is basically dealin wit herself cuz they both have the same ability......this is gon be sum shyt.....

Clare knows shes in luv wit Marcus and that she wants 2 marry him 1 day.....i hope Marcus and Clare get bak 2gether so they can finish off her twin...

831Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Wed Nov 18, 2009 4:48 pm

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нσт sɘx︱cσℓ∂ ωιиɘ™

WHEW! i'm finally caught back up

well first i would like to touch bases on the fact that Clarese has been through so much
with Marcus and that is why there bond is so strong. From the raping to the miscarriage,
it's all just too much.

Ron is a complete asshole
Moe that bitch- UGH can rot in hell! && then the little girl coming in the picture. damn Marcus

I don't blame Marcus for hiding some truth away from Clare because he was trying to
forget about his horrible past. Even if he did tell her, i'm sure her reaction would have been
the same. So either way his ass is screwed.

I hope that he finds a way to get back to Clare because they seriously need one another.

Janae! I friqqinq love this story. It's getting better and better
PLEASE ADD MORE

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832Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Fri Nov 20, 2009 6:23 pm

shawnie poo



BUMPZ 2 DA MOTHAFUKIN FULLEST!!!! Wink

833Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Fri Nov 20, 2009 8:12 pm

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нσт sɘx︱cσℓ∂ ωιиɘ™

sooooooo
janae....


where are you??? lol

you need to add Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 729222

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834Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Fri Nov 20, 2009 8:56 pm

golden07

golden07
Admin

Okay...So I just been informed
by "Bree" that I need to add so
she could add...
Well I better get to typing then since
she want to do a negro that bad...lol

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835Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Sat Nov 21, 2009 3:24 pm

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нσт sɘx︱cσℓ∂ ωιиɘ™

cheers

yes! that's the reaction i was looking for

lol!

i'll just sit and wait for this add

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836Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Sat Nov 21, 2009 3:58 pm

golden07

golden07
Admin

Okay...Adding momentarily. Just gimme a few more minutes

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837Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Sat Nov 21, 2009 4:33 pm

golden07

golden07
Admin

Chapter 32 |Love Conquers All|

Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Jessic10

Tears spilled from my eyes as I drove recklessly home. Sunlight slowly rose in the midst of the sky as thoughts blurred my outlook of my past, present, and future. I thought I knew who I was but now I am questioning who I am. After pulling up to the house I just stared at it, stared at what is now a territory I disdained.

My hands slammed against the steering wheel as my emotions spilled out. I began screaming aloud, speaking to me and me only. I don’t know what came over me. I held so much hatred inside of me. Suddenly a tap on my window sounded. Through teary eyes I seen Jinn in her robe. The back of my hand automatically wiped my tears that still came fourth. Turning the engine off, I opened the door, grabbing the keys to open the house with.

“What‘s going on? Are you okay?” Jinn asked as my tears wouldn’t stop. Marcus did me wrong in a sense of hiding what is suppose to be apart of my business. I was suppose to know about the past, but he knew all along.
“Do I look okay?” I asked her with so much attitude as I approached the house pushing the key through the entry of the door knob to open it.

Following in behind me, she asked more questions, annoying me.

“Look…I am not in the mood to talk. I just want to pack my shit and leave.” I said aloud causing her questioning to stop. I didn’t bother to apologize as I walked into the bedroom slamming the door behind. Looking around the memory filled room, I stared at the messy bed seeing that we just made love in it through the wee hours of the morning. More lies…He probably used me because of my twin. He probably didn’t love me but love that I look like her.

What has come over me…I watch as the glass shatter before my eyes after destroying the room. The door immediately swung open and there Marcus stood, eyes widening at the destruction I just caused. Instantly I dropped down on my knees crying uncontrollably. I couldn’t control my feelings. I feel as though my heart has dropped out of my body leaving a whole of nothing.

“How could you Marcus!” I shouted at him. “How could you look me in my eyes and say you love me without seeing her? Why Marcus?” I continued with my eyes held shut with tears choking my words. “I trusted you.” I said weakly and soon felt his body over me. Arms wrapped around my uncontrollable shaking.

“Let go of me please.” I begged, feeling weak from the tears I’ve been shedding.
“I love you Clarese…I can look you in your eyes and tell you I love you because she is no longer in my memory. I let her go because I seen a brighter future.” he said in my ear.
“But why? Why you didn‘t tell me? Its been years since I‘ve known you and yet you knew I had a twin and didn‘t say anything. Its like you‘ve been lying to me this whole time.” I continued.
“I haven‘t been lying to you…There are some things better left unsaid.” He simply said. I pushed him off of me to get up.
“Bullshit.” I spat out and walked to the bathroom.

I stood in the mirror to see my eyes, His body appeared in the mirror.

“Clare…What can I tell you? You have a fucking twin who don‘t give a shit about nobody. Obviously ya‘ll were split for a reason so be happy you was the lucky twin because your so called sister ain‘t bout shit.” he said harshly. I turned around and looked at him.
“You don‘t get it, do you?” I asked him while folding my arms.
“What is there to get Clare? That your dad spoiled your ass when you was younger. That he gave you what your heart desired with no questions attached. What is there to get?” he asked with no more sympathy, I guess tired of my attitude.

I gave a fake laugh before replying.

“Marcus. My life has been a lie. My past was a myth with unsure answers of who I am really related to. After all these damn years I lived, I come to find I had a sister who is trying to kill me for money.” I said.

He approached me once more standing in front of my face. His hand pulled me up by my chin.

“What is there to know. Your name is Clarese Shantae Champion. Your dad loved you with all his heart, wanting to give you everything. Your past is not lost Clare.”
“The hell it is…I bet you this fucking relationship has been a lie too.” I said and suddenly felt his hands grip around my arms causing me to look him dead in his eyes.

“Your going to throw all we build up away over this? We been through worst bullshit than this and yet you want to throw it all away.” he said as I noticed tears forming in his eyes. “Never have I dedicated my life to one person. Clare, you’re the first woman I put before myself in life. Never have I told a female I love them. Only you. I never even told my mom that, but only to you and yet you doubt my love. I thought you knew me Clare. You know you have my heart so why you want to throw it away?” he asked me as tears smeared my cheeks once more and his tears fallen from his eyes... We both wiped away each others tears.

He grabbed a hold of my hand.

“Please forgive me. I never meant for you to find out this way. Besides its not about her…Its about you, me, Zay and our future baby.” he said holding the ring up for me to see.
“I gave you this ring to show you how dedicated I am to you. I feel marriage is the only way for you to see how real I am about us…” he said.
“Marcus…” I began, but he cut me short.
“No. Listen…Give me the chance to prove to you I‘m not looking at you because of her. I hate her with a passion Clare. Accept this ring back.” he told me.
“Before I accept it, I need you to tell me something.” I told him.
“What‘s that?”
“Tell me about the past…”

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838Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Sat Nov 21, 2009 10:53 pm

SexyT

SexyT

OMG!!
Too good...
It's true Love Conquers All!!
I can't wait for Marcus to talk
And we learn more about Clare...
ADD SOOOOOOOOON

839Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Sun Nov 22, 2009 7:48 am

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нσт sɘx︱cσℓ∂ ωιиɘ™

oh em gee

this add was so beautiful
i almost cried

they love each other so much
nothing can tear them apart!

can't wait to hear about the past
thank you for the add Janae Very Happy

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840Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Sun Nov 22, 2009 7:49 am

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нσт sɘx︱cσℓ∂ ωιиɘ™

time for a new page

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841Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Sun Nov 22, 2009 7:49 am

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842Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Sun Nov 22, 2009 7:49 am

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нσт sɘx︱cσℓ∂ ωιиɘ™

cheers

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843Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Sun Nov 22, 2009 8:25 am

golden07

golden07
Admin

Thanks Bree...
Im glad ya'll enjoying it
there is more to come Smile

Now Add

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844Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Sun Nov 22, 2009 8:59 am

SexyT

SexyT

Janae you can add to!!!
NOW!!!
lol!

845Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Sun Nov 22, 2009 12:09 pm

Miz.Skittle



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846Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Sun Nov 22, 2009 1:02 pm

BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]

BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]


so , i need you to add .
thank you kindly . i am at
home on thanksgiving break and
i need some good L0NG
adds . thank you so much .

UPPZ !!

847Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Sun Nov 22, 2009 7:49 pm

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нσт sɘx︱cσℓ∂ ωιиɘ™

lol

i'ma add tomorrow after school

i guess i'll type some up tonight though
if i finish the add, i'll post tonight

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848Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Sun Nov 22, 2009 9:34 pm

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BUMPS

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849Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Mon Nov 23, 2009 4:24 pm

heatRAE!

heatRAE!

UPPSZZZZ'


I WANNA KNOW BOUT THE PASTY TO LOL



ADD SOON


pig

850Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 - Page 34 Empty Re: Unexpected II The Aftermath 07.13.10 Mon Nov 23, 2009 7:19 pm

Mizz_Choclate-Kiss

Mizz_Choclate-Kiss

When she finds out about her past she not gonna want him......cuz that lil gurl is supposedly his. Clare is gonna hate him bcuz he use 2 work 4 her uncle. She gonna hate him 4 other reasons also.........Damn WTF is gon happen now she knos she got a twin????

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