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Unexpected Writings
Stories written with unexpected anticipaton.
Shattered
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Mizz_Choclate-Kiss
kaylee
TheBee
Pleasure's wifey*peaches*
BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]
SexyT
I Am...
heatRAE!
dezzy.baby1
~!shakes_wifed_up!~
golden07
pureSEDUCTION
16 posters
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153 Re: Shattered Tue Oct 06, 2009 9:10 pm
pureSEDUCTION
Okay, I'm kinda sorta BRIBING RAE. If you post that part two soon...Imma give ya'll a double add.
Which is what I need to be doing anyway!
Which is what I need to be doing anyway!
154 Re: Shattered Tue Oct 06, 2009 10:02 pm
heatRAE!
OO GREAT NOW THE PRESSURE IS ON ME....
OK I WILL START IT EITHER TOMRW OR THE NEXT DAY LOL
OK I WILL START IT EITHER TOMRW OR THE NEXT DAY LOL
155 Re: Shattered Wed Oct 07, 2009 3:26 pm
BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]
![BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]](https://2img.net/u/4011/85/07/66/avatars/70-83.jpg)
DUDE !! i C0ULD FLiP`N SCREAM
At tHiS P0iNt !! tHA St0Ry iS EXtREMELy
G00D &+ L0NG 0VER - DUE
( GiVE it UP F0R tHA BiG GiRLS [ 14 ] ) !!
i L0VE iT !!
PLEASE ADD S00N !!
&+ RAE ... i`M FR0M tHA " M " t00 !!
( lol ) !! yEAH yEAH !!
At tHiS P0iNt !! tHA St0Ry iS EXtREMELy
G00D &+ L0NG 0VER - DUE
( GiVE it UP F0R tHA BiG GiRLS [ 14 ] ) !!
i L0VE iT !!
PLEASE ADD S00N !!
&+ RAE ... i`M FR0M tHA " M " t00 !!
( lol ) !! yEAH yEAH !!
156 Re: Shattered Thu Oct 08, 2009 10:51 am
~!shakes_wifed_up!~
big girl story....so loving it... about damn time...lol
not hating on the skinny girl stories but when you a big girl
it feels good to read about stuff like this... lol
the story is off the chain... haven't had time to really read the stories on here
but this is the second or third one i've read (shoutout to da Clare and Marcus story)lol
and i'm hooked... you have to keep adding...
but you stopped at a very good part...'
you know just like when you watching a movie on tv and you know you've seen
it a thousands but still get mad when it go to commerical???
yeah that's how i felt when i didn't see a add... can you say slap in the fast...lol
add soon
not hating on the skinny girl stories but when you a big girl
it feels good to read about stuff like this... lol
the story is off the chain... haven't had time to really read the stories on here
but this is the second or third one i've read (shoutout to da Clare and Marcus story)lol
and i'm hooked... you have to keep adding...
but you stopped at a very good part...'
you know just like when you watching a movie on tv and you know you've seen
it a thousands but still get mad when it go to commerical???
yeah that's how i felt when i didn't see a add... can you say slap in the fast...lol
add soon
158 Re: Shattered Thu Oct 08, 2009 4:15 pm
pureSEDUCTION
Hunny Bunnies, I'm almost done with one chapter which I'ma post as soon as it's done but I plan on getting the next chapter out as soonnnnnn as possible.
160 Re: Shattered Thu Oct 08, 2009 4:27 pm
BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]
YAY !! T0DAy iS JUST A
FLiP`N HAPPy DAy !!
UPPZ !!
FLiP`N HAPPy DAy !!
UPPZ !!
161 Re: Shattered Sat Oct 10, 2009 7:32 pm
pureSEDUCTION
Putting a big fake on my face, I walked into the cafeteria and sat with Marcus the next day. He leaned in to get a kiss and I obliged. But my mind was on everything but him. The loud roar of the cafeteria, the teacher who was eyeing us, the girls who were sucking their teeth in response to the kiss.
"Querida, where your head at?"
"Here. With you," I lied to him looking straight in his eyes. I know it’s a bad trait to be able to lie like that but I didn’t need him on my case.
"Indigo, Don’t lie to me. I can tell by the kiss."
I sighed and looked away only to for him to turn my head back to him. I sighed again, tears welling up in my eyes.
"Tell me, baby." He urged.
"It’s nothing really…"
"Indigo, I will throw you in the car and drive you to Ms. Amanda right now if I need to."
My eyes widened. "No." I said in a stern voice. It really was nothing to him to drive me to her office if he felt I had something going on .
"Then talk to me. I don’t need you holding it in again." His eyes automatically went to my wrists. I rolled my eyes knowing what he was getting at.
"Marcus."
"What? Indigo, I don’t want to see you bottling it in. I refuse to let that happen." He stated adamantly. He was a little loud so he was making heads turn.
"Let’s go outside." I suggested. He nodded and followed me out.
"Marcus…It’s probably nothing but….Sometimes I feel like I’m not enough…for anyone. Especially with you. And seeing you with Jazlynn…" I pretended to look at the trees just so I didn’t have to look at him.
"Indigo, If I wanted Jaz, I could have had her along time ago. And that goes for any other girl at this school. I could have had anyone I wanted, but I chose you, Querida. Baby, I wanted, want you." Marcus told me and I looked over at him and smiled.
"Your so cocky."
He pulled me close to him, "You like it though. And your missing the point, ma. I’m saying it’s me and you. Don’t let other people join our relationship."
I bit my lip and nodded. "Your too stressed. Let me take you out tonight." I nodded and he leaned down, pecking my lips. I reached and grabbed on to his neck. The kiss went on until a teacher broke it up. I sighed, Marcus’ kisses always had me thinking about giving it up to him and I had to ground myself. I guess the fact that I was a virgin added to the insecurity I felt about him.
"I’m gone pick you up at seven, Indigo. How long your dad gone let you stay out?" I thought about how strict her dad was.
"Nine or ten."
"Okay, babe. Don’t have me waiting cause I trying to sit down with your dad for more than ten minutes."
I laughed and hugged him, "It’s okay, Marcus. I’ll protect you." He laughed with me and squeezed me really tight. I felt so at home in his arms.
"Alright. You protect me from your dad and I’ll protect you from the world." I smiled and rested my head against his chest just as the bell rang.
After I saw that she had made it to her class, I walked straight off campus. I had to get my mind straight. A lot was going on with Nique. Her pregnancy was progressing and the doctor told her that what they had planned, the pills, weren’t working. I drove until I got to the last spot I thought I would be, at McDonalds on the East side of town. Where I knew she, my ex would be.
As soon as I stepped in I automatically saw her. Standing taking orders, her coke bottle figure more pronounced, face still as sexy.
I stopped and took everything in. She was still tall and bright, her hazel eyes sparkled today and a smile spread across her face as she greeted the customer. I went and stepped in her line. I was next and she wasn’t even paying attention. When the customer move and she turned around I was right there. She gasped and hesitated when she saw me. "I’m……..uh, taking my break!" She yelled back to the kitchen and ignored their protests. She can from around the counter and walked to a table. I followed her lead, and we both sat down.
"You ain’t gone say anything, Faith?"
She ran her manicured hands through her short black hair.
"…No. Well, I guess yes since I’m talking." I laughed at her nervousness. It had been about five months since I last saw her. We didn’t say anything for a while.
"I miss you," She finally said. Grabbing my hand. "Do you miss me?" Her bright hazels met my eyes. I nodded.
"I need to hear it, Marcus. Please say it." She begged me. It brought me back to the way Jazlynn begged me. But this time I knew exactly what Faith wanted to hear and I didn’t hesitate in saying it.
"I love you, Faye."
Faith Saunders always seemed to be my downfall because she was the one I always had to see when I was falling in love again. She was the one who I was sure that I had loved whole heartedly even when we crashed and burned because of her infidelity.
She smiled and let her hand go to my cheek, "Please tell me why I messed it up with you? Biggest mistake of my life."
"I don’t know."
"Who is she?"
"What do you mean, Faith?"
Her smile faded and she looked into my eyes, "You come back when your falling in love. Who is she?" I smiled back at her.
"Her name’s Indigo, she goes to my school and she’s bigger than the average."
Faith raised an eyebrow, "Like a size eight?" I shook my head no, "Oh, a ten. Not so bad." I shook my head no again.
"She’s about a size or two smaller that Mariah."
"…Poor girl."
Then, I remembered how shallow she could be. "Faith."
"…..Marcus," She said after a while, "I made a mistake yes, but I deserve another chance. You can’t possibly be happy with a big girl. She can’t possibly be as pretty as me. Does she make you laugh like I do? Make you smile? Does she make you happier than I make you?" She bombarded me with questions and expected me to answer every one.
I sighed and looked around the McDonalds and then back at her. She was getting a little misty eyed. "Faith, no one has made me feel as happy as you have. I don’t think that’s possible. But on the flip side no one’s made me hurt as bad as you had. Indigo’s the only girl who’s gotten me to break down them walls. Indigo…"
She put her hand up, "I gotta get back to work." She raised from her seat, sniffed and never looked back at me. I shook my head.
I had passed my own test. Usually after seeing Faith I’d be uninterested and me and cold to the girl I was with. This time, I was more excited to see Indigo than ever. My phone vibrated and I saw I had a text from her,
-----
From: Indigo
It’s 3:15 and I don’t see your car parked next to mine. When I see you tonight, your in trouble.
----
I smiled and got up. I nodded to Faith who was trying not to cry I made my way out to my car and started it. I need A Girl was playing again. I laughed thinking of how long ago that night at the restaurant seemed. I had found my girl, planned on keeping my girl, and was gonna make sure that not a Faith, not a China, not a Jazlynn or any other chick ruined what I had.
162 Re: Shattered Sat Oct 10, 2009 8:33 pm
BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]
I L0VE MARCUS !!!
HE DiD A G00D J0B !!
BUT i D0N`t tRUSt
ALL tHESE LiL ASS GiRLiES !!
G00D ADD MAMASZ !!
UPDAtE S00N !!
^^^^^
MUMBLE iS HAPPy t00 !!
HE DiD A G00D J0B !!
BUT i D0N`t tRUSt
ALL tHESE LiL ASS GiRLiES !!
G00D ADD MAMASZ !!
UPDAtE S00N !!
^^^^^
MUMBLE iS HAPPy t00 !!
164 Re: Shattered Sun Oct 11, 2009 8:34 am
golden07
Admin
That was an awesome add
omg Marcus is so friqqin
WONDERFUL. I think im falling
for him myself...lol
Great add...Add soon...
omg Marcus is so friqqin
WONDERFUL. I think im falling
for him myself...lol
Great add...Add soon...
166 Re: Shattered Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:38 pm
Pleasure's wifey*peaches*
Waiting for that new add
Love ur story
Love ur story
168 Re: Shattered Sun Oct 25, 2009 3:51 pm
Pleasure's wifey*peaches*
Really wanna know what kind of trouble he is in
169 Re: Shattered Sun Oct 25, 2009 6:04 pm
pureSEDUCTION
Crazy weekend.
Stupid boy. Ugh
Add coming.......whenever. I'm writing though.
Stupid boy. Ugh
Add coming.......whenever. I'm writing though.
170 Re: Shattered Sun Oct 25, 2009 6:19 pm
Pleasure's wifey*peaches*
L I S A wrote:Crazy weekend.
Stupid boy. Ugh
Add coming.......whenever. I'm writing though.
What wrong with ya?
Guy problem?
171 Re: Shattered Sun Oct 25, 2009 7:17 pm
pureSEDUCTION
Yeah. But I'm moving on now...cause apparently it just wasn't meant to be.
172 Re: Shattered Sun Oct 25, 2009 7:37 pm
golden07
Admin
Boys...Smh...We need to have a discussion then.
173 Re: Shattered Mon Oct 26, 2009 1:50 pm
heatRAE!
GIRL DNT SWEAT IT JUST LIKE GUCCI SAID BUT IN FEMALEE TERMS
"On to the next one
More fish in the sea
Boys are like buses
Miss one, next 15 one comin'"
HA
"On to the next one
More fish in the sea
Boys are like buses
Miss one, next 15 one comin'"
HA
174 Re: Shattered Mon Oct 26, 2009 2:35 pm
Pleasure's wifey*peaches*
Men are just assholes any way u put it
Even sweet ones
Even sweet ones
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